@daughteroftheking
Active 6 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Conference Season Starting…Kapeefer Meetups in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariel-ashira Hey I’m in Missouri too! 😀 Do you know about FCM?
@rochellaine No, I’m not going to any homeschooling conferences this year. The organization we do events with isn’t planning one. (They’re Family Covenant Ministries by the way). Man, that would be so cool if I met some of y’all in person! *sighs* maybe one day…..
I’ll tag more @n…[Read more]
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic Just wondering… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@daughteroftheking @alia Thanks!
Yep, I do. I just started it not too long ago.
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Alia replied to the topic Just wondering… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@daughteroftheking, I definitely think ‘where is the chocolate?’ is the correct question
@epicaddie2, I would agree with question two of the above. I’m always double guessing myself on whether my characters are relatable
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AnnaBerens replied to the topic Well, Hello, People! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@princessfoo That’s great that you have a temporary name until you can come up with a more permanent one! What made you choose Ralph, as opposed to any other male name?
@daughteroftheking Thank you! The B&tB retelling is my favorite one at the moment. I don’t have a particular favorite kind of music, but I like classical, Lindsey Stirling and…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writing Prompts in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@daughteroftheking Those are great prompts! Thanks for bringing this topic back. It was so much fun!
Here’s one I thought of today:
“But why would he want to kill me?”
“I don’t know why he will do it, and I don’t know how he will do it. All I know is that in the end, you will be dead.” -
Bella B. replied to the topic PoV's in the forum Plotting 8 years, 3 months ago
Those are good points, I think about those things while I’m writing it, thank you!
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PrincessFoo replied to the topic PoV's in the forum Plotting 8 years, 3 months ago
@daughteroftheking *waves*
@ashlyvye I think it would be really cool to have the POV character actually be the “bad guy” for most of the story, then switch sides part way through. If you switched to mostly Macx POV, I think you would lose a lot of that.
On another note, it sounds like from your description that Haylie is actually the protagonist…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@daughteroftheking okay… XP
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Catwing replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@daughteroftheking What are the answers? Tell me! 😀
(Though I think you have to dislocate your shoulder to get out of the street jacket. Right?) -
Ingrid replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!
@ariel-ashira YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!
@daughteroftheking Thank you kindly. And yes, those are some good points. *strokes chin*
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Ingrid started the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
Okay, guys. I got brave and decided to share the prologue from the first draft of my fantasy novel, Substitute. Since it’s obviously the opening of the book, I want to know if you guys would keep reading. And please add grammar mistakes/rewording edits. I love your advice!!! 🙂
Here goes noth…[Read more]
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Catwing posted an update 8 years, 3 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong @jess-penrose @daughteroftheking
I’ve been thinking about changing the VR scene in the first two chapters. Perhaps to just a ‘playdate’ with them sword fighting (because I want to have sword knowledge before they go on their quest), obstacle course, or something like that.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Lots of Crazy Keapeefers in the forum Poetry 8 years, 3 months ago
@daughteroftheking @valtmy @daeus *bows as confetti rains on one and all* Â Thank you! Â Thank you!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@jenwriter17 @skredder @catwing @kaya-young @rochellaine @everyonelse
Thank you so much, guys, for praying for my talk. It went really well, despite some last minute catastrophes. It was really good and I think it touched the heart of quite a few people. I was even told that my shy, introverted self has a gift for public speaking.
Anyway, I’m so…[Read more]
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PrincessFoo replied to the topic Well, Hello, People! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
@annaberens Me too! I especially love the song Evermore in the new Disney Beauty and the Beast movie. @daughteroftheking and I both cried when we heard it for the first time. (And my brother sat next to me say, “You know that Belle comes back, right? She comes back.”)
I haven’t actually written the retellings yet, but I would be happy to share…[Read more]
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RaeMarie replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@annaberens Thank you! I am on Facebook 🙂
@ariel-ashira I don’t feel comfortable posting my songs for a lot of people, but if there was a way I could email them to you? @daughteroftheking @sam-kowal @jess-penrose
Also, thank you for all your advice! I will try it and we shall see what happens!:)
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filewriter@base13x started the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Um, no. I don’t think we’ve lost our minds. We’re just writers. It’s not like we’re crazy, right?
Haha, anyways.
What this is really about is… *clears throat* I. Am. Going to… Write… AstoryofKingdomPen!!!
I am way to excited about this, but, yes, I am going to write a KPA, because we are so in need of another one. 😉 I know that I am new…[Read more]
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Grace H. replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@celticcailin Hey there! I don’t write songs, and I don’t know anyone on the forum who does, so I’m going to tag a bunch of people who know a bunch of people, and maybe can help you locate advice you need.
@dekreel @dragon-snapper @supermonkey42 @rochellaine @seekjustice @daeus @catwing @daughteroftheking
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Grace H. replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@daughteroftheking Oh the family one is awesome!! xD Your influence is very, very deep.
You know you are a writer when you find the perfect way to describe this shade of red in a craft you just made.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Whoops! Okay, I’ll keep praying then. 😀
That’s great news! I’m glad to hear that I’m not the only barefooted hobbit as well 🙂
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I think that would be good. As long as it is clear what is going on, and maybe provides some insight into the characters personalities during the scenes, which would make it doubly useful.