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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy I guess that’s true. The Hans scene still works though, because the whole thing was how much compassion Ben felt for him, but he still killed him anyways. I guess that’s how I should have phrased my point. Make the villains feel their consciences very strongly and then go out and deny them.
@anne-of-lothorien Second person is…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien I write in both first and third person. I love them both. Some stories fit first person and some third person. Then there is Scarlet Rose where I flip between first person, present tense, and third person past tense. It works really well. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
I agree with Hope. Good villains aren’t just villains with lots of soft spots, humor, tough pasts, or good intentions. Good villains have to be absolutely evil. Using my good buddy Kylo Ren again, he killed the jedi, killed his dad, was fine with the first order completely obliterating ten planets and everyone on them, had fits of rage, and tried…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Sorry, flat out of dark chocolate. Almost out of Pringels now too, which is my salty snack of choice.
I am up to 20,000 words though and I’m hoping to write an extra 1000 or so today so I will have more freedom later on in the month around Thanksgiving…
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien I so want to read a book like that. And, if no one writes it, I may have to undertake the task myself. Someday. 😉
As for my bad guys, I like to make them quite bad and yet human at the same time. I want the readers to be able to see why they made the choices they did, and how the choices got them to where they are now.…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien I tend to write the more human, complex villains and I’m moving even more in that direction.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Ha! That’s awesome!
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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy Yeah, I guess writing is almost a bible study tool. I’m not sure it helps me concentrate though. I’m likely to be distracted memorizing my ideas so that I won’t forget them. It was really bad when I got the first two lines of my “On I comes a Dwappaling” poem strike me out of nowhere during a sermon and I kept repeating them to…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@sleepwalkingmk I actually get most of my writing ideas from sermons. I tend to approach my stories by starting out with a very basic plot idea and then filling in the rest of it by coming at it from a thematic viewpoint. Sermons being filled with heaps of good thematic material, I tend to come away with lots of plot ideas.
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Daeus replied to the topic Help Me, Help You, Help…er…The World? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@mark-kamibaya @michael-stanton
I suppose it would be helpful to a degree. I think the disadvantages would outweigh those however. For one, a person may be super helpful with ten subjects, but not with five and so they would get tagged for stuff they don’t know much about. Also, people would use it too often. Especially considering that the most…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Sure, Anna.
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Daeus replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Ah, thanks for the reminder. Will do.
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Daeus replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sounds like someone I know. Is this Mrs. Keussal (or however you spell their name)?
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Daeus replied to the topic Bless us and splash us, Precious, another Newbie! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@jess That’s sweet. I always wanted to do that. I did fencing for about 2 1/2 years as a foil and did a little informal study into the rapier, small sword, and broadsword. Of course, fencing isn’t entirely true to traditional sword fighting, but the basics of it are still the same. Do you do medieval broadswords, rapiers, other? Ever done it with…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Politics in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Christian, Jeffersonian Republican, Conservative Republican/Libertarian, Antifederalist.
And along with Kate’s note, please don’t get too carried away and allow this to become twenty-page topic since I’m supposed to keep an eye on all comments as a moderator.
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Daeus replied to the topic Bless us and splash us, Precious, another Newbie! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@jess Really? Is it fencing, traditional sword fighting, stage fighting, or some sort of modern swordsmanship?
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Daeus replied to the topic Why Paolini works (or doesn't) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
That cult is weird.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Corissa/Anne I don’t know if I’ve ever asked myself that question. I might have. I ask myself a lot of questions, but can’t generally remember them.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy *hands you WD-40* Here, spray this all over yourself. He’ll like you then.
I’m really sorry about that, by the way. If you want me to have a talk with him, I can.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Yep. Youtube, Emma.
@kate-flournoy I have? This is an existential crisis moment. But he disliked me a little? That’s. Absolutely. Terrible! *hides in a hole and covers top* What if I gave him youtube. Then he could watch the king of random and oh! he would be so happy and would no doubt love me for it. Right? Right?
Right?
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