@daisy-torres
Active 1 month, 1 week ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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E. K. Seaver replied to the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@devastate-lasting, @abigail-m thank you!
@daisy-torres, thank you for commenting on the first chapter! I wasn’t sure if you saw the second and third chapter or not, or you just didn’t have time to look at them, just wanted to let you know that they’re there. 😂
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
OH MY WORD, Daisy!!!!!! Thank you for this!!!!!! I’m so happy I HAVE FAN ART!! Woohoo!!!! I really like it, and you totally got her dress perfect!! Thank you!! 🙂
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E. K. Seaver started the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey everyone, so Wings is a story I’m working on (and am probably going to end up having as another serial story on my blog), but I’m struggling with the first little bit. Is it engaging? What do you think of it? Where do you anticipate the story going? How do you feel about the characters?
Critique as brutally (*cough* Dark chocolate *cough*) a…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
OH MY WORD, girl that means soooo much to me!!! Thank you!!! 🙂 And I’ll totally have you read for me in the future!! I’m super happy that you like it, because I was super nervous posting it and wasn’t sure if it was any good! Aww, I’m sure it wasn’t bad! Some of my earlier writing was verrry cringeworthy XD But thank you!!!! E…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Heyo!!! Ooo YAY!!! I love the title…
Oh. my. gosh. I ADORE this simile sooo much!!!
Aaahh, my eyes are watering already!! 😢
You did it again–girl, you got skills!! 😃
*cue jaw drop*
Maybe instead of “this child” again, you could write “Bridgett”? there was a little repetitiveness. So sad!…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Of course, girl!!! Anytime!!! 🙂 *high-fives*
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
THANK YOU, Daisy!!!!! <3333333 Seriously, girl, your feedback was AMAZING!! I’m super glad you were hooked!!! 😀 I look forward to what you think of Pt. 2!!!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres AHH that was so good and sad and beautiful! I love your descriptions!
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Thanks, Daisy!! I’ll be happy for you to read it!! And no problem 😉 Ahaha, it’d probably be wise to start with this one. Can’t wait to hear your thoughts/feedback!!
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
GIRL, this is amazing!! It made me cry!! It was so sweet and sad (I say that in a heartfelt way) and had some lovely descriptions!! Those first two lines? Already got me hooked. Also, I adore the name Bridgett. *applauds* Well done! 🙂
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ella replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @e-k-seaver, @daisy-torres, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @abigail-m, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @writerlexi1216, @jenwriter17, @godlyfantasy12, @hallie-jean, @ribbonash, @wyn-rose
Hey everyone!! I just want to thank you all for your tips/input/reading/offering-to-read/etc. and I want you to know how much I appreciate…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
By the by, if some others wanted to read it, I’d really appreciate the feedback! I may tag a few more people (because every smidget of feedback is helpful for a first-time writer!) 🙂 Obviously you’d have to go back to the first post of my first chapter…
@jenwriter17 @kayleigh-idea @ribbonash @wyn-rose @daisy-torres @mkfairygirl @godlyfantasy12
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Kads posted an update 3 years, 9 months ago
MY BLOG IS PUBLISHED! @mkfairygirl @issawriter7 @abigail-m @daisy-torres @nova21 @gracie-j @hallie-jean @kathleenramm @devastate-lasting
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Kads replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Haha, ikr!!! Its face is just so weird and creepy…
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres @scripter-of-kingdoms
I love these poems!
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Kads replied to the topic Inspirational Images & Quotes ❤️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Np!! I’ll be happy if you decide to post here!!
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ella replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey Jenna! Ooo, good, so glad you’ll read it!!! 😃 Yep, I love spec-fic too. ❤
Hey Issa! Aww, thanks SO much!!!! ❤ That means a lot–you’re so good at making peoples’ days, lol!! 😜 And thanks for reading!!
Hey Daisy! Thanks for reading and I hope you like it!! 😃
Hey Katherine! Of co…[Read more]
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ella started the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey people!!! I finished my first chapter of Lioness (YA, futuristic speculative fiction), and I’d LOVE it if y’all could read and critique it for me!!! It’s about 2000 words long. And please please please don’t hold back on critiquing–I’m trying to become a better writer so I absolutely need to know what has to change. (
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Kads started the topic Inspirational Images & Quotes ❤️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey everybody!
This is basically the topic where when you see a cool image or quote, you put it here. I’d prefer primarily images here, but if you see a cool quote don’t be afraid to post it! 😀 The images can be anything, (just be sure to follow KP posting rules, of course) from fan art of something you like to a book cover you thought looked…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 3 years, 9 months ago
@joy-caroline @gracie-j @devatate-lasting @daisy-torres @e-k-seaver @scripter-of-kingdoms
I just re-read everyone’s poetry and they are all such beautiful poems:) Amazing! 😀
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Oops- forgot a very important person! Sorry! XD
@writerlexi1216
CONGRATULATIONS, GIRL!!!! <33333 Aww, I'm so happy for you!! I'll have to rush over there to check it out, if you're comfortable with that!!! *gives you chocolate* *throws confetti everywhere* YIPPPEEEE!! 🙂
CONGRATS!! That’s so AWESOME! I’ll have to check it out! 😀
YESSS AWESOME!!!!!!! Imma gonna go check it out right now!!!!! WOOHOOOOO!!!!!!! <33
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEEESSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 *continues screaming with excitement* That is incredible!!!!!!!!!! I am so happy for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<333333
Yay!
YAY!!! You go, girl!!! So happy for ya!! 😊
AHHH! Thank you SO MUCH, all of you!! This means SO MUCH to me. I’ll probably be posting on Wednesdays and Saturdays, so look out for new posts then!!!! :DDDDDD THANK YOU to EVERYONE for the NEVERENDING SUPPORT!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33333333333333
EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry I just saw this!!!! A million congrats!!!!!!!!
@hallie-jean Thank you!!! I’m so happy that I have all of you guys here and supporting me!!! :DDD