Daisy Torres

@joy-caroline

ok, my summary of what you described:

Temira’s trust is hard to win so when she loves someone she’s fiercely protective. In this case, I’d assume she overprotects Reuben and doesn’t allow him to do things that could get him even a little bit hurt because of being hurt herself. Because of her loyalty, she is so careful to keep him…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Bahahaha!  I know, me toooooo!  My sister was really annoyed about how much I was gushing about Dylan… he’s just so amazing!  If I could bring any of my charries to life, it’d be him (and then I’d marry him!) XD XD XD

@godlyfantasy12

Thank ya kindly!  <3  Ooo, cool!  I’d say Corvina might be a conflicted character, and Arabella might be a really sweet, friendly personality.  Am I right? XD

@kathleenramm

Girl, I’d totally read this!  Totally keep writing… GO GO GO! 😉

@anatra23

Thanks!  I know, it’s kinda weird to see the dialogue out of context.  But th…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

Congrats Emily!!  I’ll do it!  Dystopian is my all time favorite genre.  I’m so excited to read this!

My email is ellafinkbeiner11@gmail.com

Thanks for the opportunity!

Yeah, I can relate to that! Lol!

Wow! That’s SO COOL! I love to hear what inspires people to write; I think your mission is great too! I have the same goal!

Love the Tolkien quote! That’s one of my favorites! I’ve seen many people literally make that decision and walk the other way.

Ooo! That is totally something I’d read! I’d love to hear more…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting lol thanks!

@nova21 Hahahahaha cinnamon rolls! That’s great! XD

@gracie-j

Hey Gracie!  Aw, thanks girl!  I love quiet, gruff guys… they’re so soft on the inside, like cinnamon rolls… XD

@keilah-h

Nice!  She seems pretty curious, and now I’m curious about your story! 😃

@lewilliams tagged me here, so I figured I’d hop by! Sorry I’ve not been very active on KP; life’s been crazy lately. I’m currently burned out, haha, seeing as I finished my first novel in June. I tried doing NaNo this month but I was too burned out and stopped halfway through… hngh… currently trying to do more with the plotsy side of things.…[Read more]

@gracie-j

you’re welcome!! 🙂

I totally understand what you mean; I do that so often, which is why it’s lovely to have several very different people in my book so one can ramble, one play devil’s advocate, and the other one, who’s the quiet rough one, can end any stupidity happening in the disagreement. XD

@nova21

haha, thanks! I guess she’s based on yours truly *bows, then hesitates, evaluates character, and wonders if I actually paid myself a compliment or not… *

@gracie-j

First of all… I LOVE the name Keaton! second, his dialogue seems to fit. I suppose just keep his lines short, don’t have him using too many please n’ thank you’s and keep…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

Hahaha!  I already love Felicity!  😉

@devastate-lasting

He totally sounds like you described him.  If I had to go on an adventure now, I’d want him to be the leader! 😉

@daisy-torres

Can I hang out with Catherine for a day, please?  Just a day? XD

@lewilliams

Hahaha!  Poor Horace.  *cough* dumb teenagers *cough* 🙂

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@nova21

You’re welcome! 🙂 the story sounds so intriguing, and I’m sure it’ll be epic, whatever you decide!

@kayleigh-idea

Hey Kayleigh!!  Of course!  That’s a great idea, I definitely get wanting that feeling of satisfaction. 🙂

@elfwing

Hey Elfwing!  Thanks!!  Oh I totally get that!!  That’s an awesome idea, thanks for the advice!

@daisy-torres

Hey Daisy!  Aw, thanks!!  That’s super helpful, especially the part about realizing that he can love <…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

Been there. A lot.

I agree with all these fine folks!

I will break up my advice:

1: I’d say don’t try too hard on things. If you’re finding it hard, write what you can, and don’t push so hard you’re on the edge of tears (personal admonishment for myself right now XD), but as Elizabeth said, refill!!! I love writing, but at…[Read more]

@maryg3

Thank you! it took me a year and a half to decide! lol

Well, I must say my inspiration was partly from a Griffin clan keychain pendant I was given two years ago. One side of my family two generations back has that last name. 🙂 That triggered the story being started as well as the story of the MC (main character), but the actual world…[Read more]

@will_starke

sorry, your tag didn’t go through the first time

@nova21

haha!! Great idea!! And I’d say your MCs dialogue fits.

My sci fi book MC is shy in big groups but stubborn and has her opinions and likes to bug her brother

her first three lines in the story:

(Omits action) Alden, stop it! I hit in here five minutes ago!”

(Omits action) “Good morning. I didn’t burn the house down so that’s encouragi…

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That sounds great!!

What would you say sparked your inspiration to write the series?