Crocheter12

@thearcaneaxiom

Emotions are definitely interesting. You can’t just think all the time, “how would I feel?” because not all people respond the same way as others. So it definitely requires you getting to know your characters…

Oh, and Mary Sue makes a lot more sense now lol.

I, unfortunately, have yet to read much by Brandon Sanderson. I do…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

I love part two and three! The storyline is really good, and I’m excited to see where it’s heading. 🙂

Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣

Tags: @janellebelovedpig @felicity @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else

Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]

@esther-c

👍!!!

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks! I definitely was kind of experimenting with a lot of different things that I normally don’t do in my writing… Like prophecy, and more POVs than I’m used to. Throughout the next few chapters, more are added in, including the male POV. I think something I’ve also done is made a lot of the characters…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks!!! How to Train Your Dragon is awesome, and your story sounds really cool. 🙂 I’ll tag you when I get the next chapter up!

@felicity

Thanks for the advice! 🙂I think I will go a little wild and do some planning for the next chapters, just to make sure everything stays clear. 🤣

I’ll most likely have chapter two up by the end of the day. Just gonna look over it first, because I’ve been looking at so many WIPs that I kind of got it confused with another… So, I’m just…[Read more]

Random thought rq, Blackhorn’s speech was normally italicized, but it didn’t do that when I transferred it, so that’s why it’s weird. 😅 Thanks to everyone who reads through that lol.

@janellebelovedpig

Thanks!!! 😃

@felicity

Thanks! And I get it, sometimes I even confuse myself with worlds that I built. 🤣

Hmmm…. Good question. I guess I’d…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig

And yeah, this is the same Elryn from before, just younger. I just realized I already put him somewhere, and it would be confusing, so… Yeah. 😅🤣 This is a later version, so that last one had his name with an ‘i’ instead of a ‘y’. But the plan is to make a book later about Elryn specifically, which is the scene in…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Yes! I love Narnia, and really enjoyed this! Sometimes I’m nervous to read fanfictions on books I like, because I’m worried it will change the book to much, but this definitely didn’t! Good job!

@janellebelovedpig

Good work! I enjoyed reading it and would totally read more! 🙂

The names make me think of Pilgrim’s Progress (that’s not a bad thing lol), which makes sense, because they’re both allegorical. Makes me want to read it again.

@awsumfaith

They sound great! And again, I love the aesthetic! 😃

@loopylin

The drawings are great! And yeah, I can see why everyone loves Dante. He’d be my favorite, too.

@seekjustice

Sounds really cool! I’d totally read it.

Also, looking back on that fourth question… I don’t remember what I was thinking. At all. So, just three questions. 😅🤣

@kathleenramm

Thanks!

I’ll definitely have to think about that. Putting my finger on a certain topic has been difficult, so I’ll just have to figure that out.

@freedomwriter76

Thanks!

RIKER, YES! 😃

Lol I’ve heard a lot about him on here already, but I’m kind of new, so now I get to actually know about him! He seems really, really cool. Also, the moodboard seems really cool, but I would never actually know how to do one. 😅

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Thanks!!!

And Teilo sounds great! 🙂

@awsumfaith

Arwen sounds so cool! For some reason, though, I like most names with ‘wen’ at the end, so I guess I’m just weird. The aesthetic is especially cool!😃

I’ll try a one of my not-so-human characters and a human, because I don’t have a whole lot of humans. 😅

Rina- MC for Healer

A few years (more or less) from adulthood. A Lupinari…[Read more]

@acancello

Also, I’d love to see more of your writing if you’re willing to share! I loved your description. 🙂

@acancello

I’m back! 🤣

This is an intro I enjoyed from a WIP that I may or may not continue.

Lori watched from the peak of Crescent Tower, looking out over her kingdom, now bright and colorful with a slight fall breeze. She knew soon it would turn to winter’s freezing chill, and cherished this moment of peace and happiness. The winter was h…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks!

Anyway, those are the main races I’ve drawn. I have Falcor and Arcanin somewhere, but can’t find them… The Falcor are pretty much talking birds, and the Arcanin are just bears with stars on their foreheads. Here’s a quick drawing of the solar system, cause I can’t find the one I drew earlier. The picture is kind of bad, but…[Read more]