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@princesachronicle22

Ah! Serin! No! Her father seems terrible. 😡 You should add him to the castle so I can have one of my charries beat him up.

@acancello

Nice! I would say it’s better, but the restaurant scene could have worked with some changes too.

I staggered over to an almond tree that was bent into the shape of a seat that was covered in moss and fallen flower petals and sunk down on it breathing hard.

I would make that sentence separated into two, it’s a little long.

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, I would, but my family is about to go out to eat! I’ll try to get one in tonight, if not, then tomorrow. 🙂 Sorry!

@godlyfantasy12

Aww Aaron!! He’s so precious and sweet <3<3

And…that picture…Wow. Just WOW. XD

@freedomwriter76

Happy Birthday!!!

I hope your birthday is AMAZING!!!! 🥳🎉🎈🎊💖

Thank you so much 😊🥰💖!!!!! It has been pretty amazing so far 🥰

Aww Liam!! Riker!! And Cameron!!

XDXD Damien!! He’s so cute.

@godlyfantasy12

im also wondering if Vance is still going to get away with Bren because that group is getting large… but I also am enjoying t…

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@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 Aw, I love Steve. He’s being all sweet and friendly despite everyone in the room distrusting him. ❤️

Eddie

Despite Adolphus’ assurances, the girl, Arabella, and the boy still seemed wary. Eddie tried her best to wipe the scowl off her face.

Why am I so moody? When’s the last time I slept? Th…[Read more]

@artsy-dragon

Very cool! I like the person!

@godlyfantasy12 Yeah, you explained it well. I love the idea of them covering themselves with their wings!

@keilah-h @theloonyone Oh, and I forgot to say, I’m pulling Aurivis out. He was getting kinda hard and boring to write because he doesn’t fit in the castle and I still don’t know how his magic works. I might write a short thing later about him coming back to his own world.

@godlyfantasy12

I love all the difference fae, this is so cool! I kinda want to draw a dryad now…  What do the kobolds look like?

@godlyfantasy12

Simon (Beth’s brother and Carter and Carmen’s friend) got a concussion. He might just heal miraculously, though, because I’m kinda getting bored of him sleeping so much XD

@theloonyone @keilah-h

Beth

Everyone was suddenly back together again, plus one extra. Beth eyed the dark-haired newcomer warily as she stood up.

“What did you find?” She said, turning her attention back to Crosshair. “And does anyone here even have any medical experience?”

Oops, I mean the Shal’le 🤦 Sorry! XD

@esther-c

Girl…

That scene…

Was…

AMAZING!!!! 🤩

I really enjoyed reading it and it kept me on the edge of my seat! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!! 😃✨

Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️

@princesachronicle22

AHHH!!!! Dylan, Asher!!! That was so good girl!!!

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@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Ah sorry girl! I probably won’t be on much the next day or two, tomorrow is my birthday and I’m going to be gone for a lot of the day. And yes, I think it’s your turn to split up the groups! 🙂

Also, is it my turn to RP as Vance?

@euodia-vision

You’re so welcome!! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

well I don’t think their ages would change. I just had mentioned earlier in RPs that their adventure had just started so we’d have to ignore that XD

Sounds good!! And wow, Aram looks very mysterious…

And Oh My Gosh Ginny and Aaron!! That’s adorable!!! 😁❤️🤩 AHHH it’s so much like November and Ara!!

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@esther-c

oh, just finished it!

He let her lead him to the circle the group had made. Ev stood next to Lukas. He ruffled his hair and smiled down at his little brother. Lukas looked up and frowned.

“What?” Ev whispered.

“I’m a teenager,” Lukas replied.

Ev grinned. “I know. I’m supposed to embarrass my teenage little brother. Right?”

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@lightoverdarkness6

❤️❤️❤️

@godlyfantasy12

OOOH!!! He sounds SO cool! And sneaky…reminds me of Vance, lol. Yeah, I’d be fine with it!! Like changing their ages and such, and what they’ve done so far in the book(s)?

Ah sorry! I’ve gotta get off, my family is getting together down on our land, but I can talk when I get home this afternoon! Talk to ya later! 😀