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whaley replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months, 1 week ago
I love how both of those sentences are probably super accurate. Now I want to know why Fel wants to get rid of the robots.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Hehe, let me do it for you. *Boops him* *He doesn’t react* :]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 11 months, 1 week ago
This is a weird question to ask, but does anybody want to interview Marcel? I’m feeling icky and can’t think straight enough for the roleplays. I don’t know, just want something cheerful to do. @loopylin @rae @godlyfantasy12 @savannah_grace2009
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
I second what Ellette says. It depends on what things look like with my mom and how much time I’ll have between family stuff and working. But I would really love to do this!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Ohhhh that makes more sense.
And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ sla…
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Boom, finally caught up
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…
The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD
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whaley started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months, 1 week ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot

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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr
I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol
so if you want to read it…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
THANK YOUUU (:
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I need to think a little more, and I’ll be sure to tag you when I have something!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Thanks girl! IT HAS BEEN A WHILE!!!!! I’ve missed you *hugs*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
First of all, girl, I love you so much 😂😂💜😭
You’re the best and your personality is actually such a vibe hahaha
I appreciate you so much, you make me smile <3
The thing is, if I make myself write as a routine, it will seem like a chore. Plus life is very crazy and uncertain because of all the stuff with my mom and I don’t want to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
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