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@writerlexi1216

Been there. A lot.

I agree with all these fine folks!

I will break up my advice:

1: I’d say don’t try too hard on things. If you’re finding it hard, write what you can, and don’t push so hard you’re on the edge of tears (personal admonishment for myself right now XD), but as Elizabeth said, refill!!! I love writing, but at…[Read more]

@maryg3

Thank you! it took me a year and a half to decide! lol

Well, I must say my inspiration was partly from a Griffin clan keychain pendant I was given two years ago. One side of my family two generations back has that last name. 🙂 That triggered the story being started as well as the story of the MC (main character), but the actual world…[Read more]

@will_starke

sorry, your tag didn’t go through the first time

@nova21

haha!! Great idea!! And I’d say your MCs dialogue fits.

My sci fi book MC is shy in big groups but stubborn and has her opinions and likes to bug her brother

her first three lines in the story:

(Omits action) Alden, stop it! I hit in here five minutes ago!”

(Omits action) “Good morning. I didn’t burn the house down so that’s encouragi…

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@maryg3

yes I did come up with a name; The Forgotten World

haha thanks glad you like the meme!

@keilah-h

i see!  you still did well 🙂

@maryg3

ahhh yes they totally ruined the Hobbit movies. Although I think they did a good job of Smaug

LoTR is my favourite book to read and I’ve listened through it several times too! Cool that you listen through it too! I have the  unabridged audiobook copy narrated by Rob Inglis. I can fall asleep listening to that book now lol

i am cu…[Read more]

@maryg3

Hi!! Welcome!

Sounds like you are writing some really intriguing stories! 🙂

Have you read/watched the Hobbit/Lord of the Rings?

@gracie-j whoops! sorry lol

@ben-dykes

Hi there!! Good to meet you! As far as advice, I’d say don’t be shy to ask anything you want answers for, the people on here are very friendly and even though I’ve only been on here a couple months its been so so helpful for my writing journey

I don’t bite unless provoked and am generally amiable and happy unless I’m too hot, too…[Read more]

@keilah-h

No you aren’t boring me; i don’t know what the shows are, so they might not mean as much, but i still think they’re cool! 🙂 good job! you are good at doing multiple drawings of the same character; that is one if the hardest things for me to do as an artist.

@precious-y

If you want reading suggestions, I know plenty of good books. Into whimsical humor? Percy Jackson and the Olympians. Historical growth and women’s rights? Little Women. (I don’t really know what you’re interested in other than fiction and historical, so forgive any blubbering on my part.)

Maybe you’d like Crown of Feathers by Nicki…[Read more]

@keilah-h

wow good job!! I like them both! I like the features you gave them while keeping them human. And also the biology so-to-speak of the species and their special adaptations etc

@nova21

Maybe during the course of the series there could be a goal he’s striving to achieve. I know it’s getting home, but will the getting home stretch over the whole thing, or just one book? If it’s a single book, then maybe give him a larger goal, like to find the meaning of what it’s like to know you’re loved, but make it a development that…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

Well this is true lol

why thank you thank you

@sami-eastwood

that sounds so cool!!

@kathleenramm

thanks!!

the only part I still like about that story is Bacon, he was a good bear that shall live on in my memory for a future story lol

@nova21  that’s so sweet, and the storyline sounds really good.

@keilah-h

whatever you wanna show me! 🙂 I like all of the above XD

@nova21

well i like it!! the idea is very cool and sounds like you have an amazing story in the making!

I’d say you could probably continue his lie through the series as long as you have a way for it to be easily triggered, and words can do that. If he believes/believed he’s unloved, there would be insecurity. When people are insecure, comments…[Read more]