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Elizabeth replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
It is, definitely. You’ll get it right, though, I know it. 😉
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Snapper posted an update 6 years, 7 months ago
Hey guys! 😀 So seems like everyone’s taking a hiatus. 😛 I’m going to as well. Whatnot with NaNo, School, blogging and trying to get my book ready for publication, I need more time than I have. So I shall return, but for now, I’m on a vacation. I’ll still be posting on my blog and I’ll be on facebook too. 😀 Visit me!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
*sighs*
I hate to say it, but I think your friend was right.
It’s not a bad thing, necessarily. The chapter introduced the family dynamic, and introduces a few things that will (obviously) come into play later in the story, but it doesn’t have a whole lot of oomph–by which I mean, something that draws the reader into the story. There’s…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Hi! I popped in and read this too, just ’cause I was curious. Hope that’s okay.
Overall, it’s really good so far! I’m just a bit confused as to whose POV you’re using to tell the story? At times, it seems as if it’s being narrated by someone altogether different from the characters in the scene, which is kind of disorienting.
Other than that,…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Private Messaging in the forum Questions and Support 6 years, 7 months ago
Hey @valtmy, I’d also like to point out that google docs does have a feature you can set the doc to that allows you to pick and choose who has access to your doc based on their email, so if you wanted to do it that way, you could.
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@skredder Ugh…
It was pretty good! Today, incredibly enough, was the first time in my entire life I have ever dyed eggs.
Except with the holiday, I’m NOT ready for Monday… 😛
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@skredder I disappeared. But I suppose I can reappear again before disappearing for two months…
How was your Easter?
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Joy replied to the topic KP Literature Character Search Corner in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
@daughteroftheking *leans back and smirks with delight at the tap-dancing tiger* Most delightful thing ever.
Anyway, you’re welcome! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@epicaddie2 @seekjustice @sam-kowal @rochellaine @jane-maree
Wow. Okay, seeing what you guys are posting about Camp NaNoWriMo makes me want to be a member. XD
*double-takes* Hang on — am I a–
Edit: Oh. My. Word. I’m a Chosen One, guys! 0.0 😀
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Joy replied to the topic KP Literature Character Search Corner in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
I just made a serious mistake: Not everyone wants to, or is able to, submit their entries on the doc! So I will allow you to submit it here. In fact, I think it’s best if you submit it here.
Submit this information:
Name:
Species: (Can be human. Or anything else…)
Appearance:
Personality:
Other notes and/or facts:And if you are already on…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic KP Literature Character Search Corner in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine I invited you to the CSC. Are you able to edit it?
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 @skredder @rochellaine
I’m reading some Tale of Two Cities if anyone want to join.
(To those of you who are viewing this from your email, this is Readers’ Corner not Writers’ Corner. 😉 )
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@foreverme Ohh, I’m so glad you liked it! And it’s okay you’re late. 😉
@daughteroftheking Yes, praise God!
Thanks so much, N.C.!! Love ya, too, sister. 😉
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Joy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@warrenluther04 Thank God for stirring her heart! You will be missed, pal. 😉
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@sam-kowal Thank you!!
I’ll look forward to seeing you two again, as well. I can’t wait to see how Stan has grown (or shrunk…)
@ariel-ashira Thanks a lot!! Ahhhh, satisfying endings…
@daeus Was it that good? Awwww, thanks!!
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 Ohhh, thanks!!
My pleasure!! I didn’t know it would be so lengthy. XD
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@supermonkey42 Yes, good choice of words. This morning I was hiding eggs for kids, and I felt just about the same way. 😉
Yes, awesome. Why do you think I call it the “bestest place in Cyberspace?” XD
You’re welcome! I shall be looking forward to my return
@skredder You’re welcome!! I’m glad you like it. 😀
@ingridrd Thank you! Yes, sa…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part the Last: Joy, Mirth, and Acclamation
“Three…”
It was noon. The public Easter worship service at the castle Regnis had recently come to a close. Creamy clouds slid across the sky, and The Raspberry Sun shone upon the Kingdom of Pen, bringing refreshing warmth.
“…Two…”
Jenna was lounging in a lawn chair (w…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Correct! I love that scene. I saw a live stageplay on YouTube of the Taming of the Shrew and LOVED it.
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Aw, you too?! *sniffs* this is too much.
Well I hope you have a great hiatus! 🙂 We’ll have to have some celebratory part when you, Dekreel, and Warren return. 😉 when do you think you’ll be back?
Not you too! *sighs* When will you return? Can I still tag you?
@jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira Absolutely you can still tag me. 🙂 I just might not be able to respond all the time, but I love hearing from you all. <3
And I expect to return within a week or few. Certainly no longer than May 1.
@dragon-snapper Okay! 😀 At least you guys aren’t taking super long hiatuses 🙂
*waves good bye to another friend* Please return… You will be missed.
So long for now, Chosen Kid. :3