@beth-torres
Active 1 week, 2 days ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I love him so much!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!!
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Esther posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I’ve been reading through your WIP lately. I think I’m gonna try to read through the whole thing then come back with critiques. So it might be awhile before you get any feedback. Idk. I’ll try to read fast tho and get to the parts you were concerned about. (:
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hybridlore replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Love it! No big critiques. Can’t wait to read more!!
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Alrighty!! The promised first two chapters! Any feedback is welcome 🙂
Chapter 1
“Wait a coup?”“Shh, keep your voice down.”
“Hold on, start over.” Everton Barlowe stared down his older brother.
Asher sighed. “Did you not listen the first time?”
“I was stuck on the word ‘coup.’”
Another sigh. “Okay.” Asher tossed dark strands of hair off hi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry if it’s a bit blurry
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh and yes, Amir was.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ok!! Thanks (:
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Actually, someone I know calls me magical because on certain days, I just seem to disappear and reappear. It’s all just me going off to my own shadows and them not paying attention.
It’s funny, because on dark nights I always slink off, and other kids think I’m trying to hide or be sneaky. They tell me they can see me,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry for the momentary spamming… XD
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
And finallyyy…
Adrian

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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Amir

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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Hallie

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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @beth-torres @anyone-else-sticking-around
I am agonizing over who to add and literally cannot choose, so I’mma let y’all pick. XD
Options… (and I am more than willing to add two)
Easton

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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lukas
“Wh-what? Did you, um, say-say something?” He searched her face.
“Nothing.” She smiled and shook her head.
Lukas frowned. He knew what she had said… “Why you?” He repeated, his voice low and tender. “Because—” he sighed. “I’ve never had anyone in my life who was more than a friend, but if I did, I know you’d be the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nahim cut a hole in the wall and slipped through XD
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Esther replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m not sure if you can even tell what I was trying to say up there. The number of typos is so cringe! XD I just never post from my phone because my phone browser hates KP for some reason 👀😂
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @rae
Lukas shocked EVERYONE!!! *evil laugh* 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
He can run into Fynn… but I don’t know what would happen then. XD He can wait for Lukas to come back. 😉
Ooh, love it. I’m game.
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Oh okay! Thanks! (:
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