Beth Torres

@mineralizedwritings

Ah, gotcha. 😁

Awww, they look so cuteeee!! 😍🥰

@mineralizedwritings

No that actually is really helpful! I like the perspective you gave. Thank you!! 😊

@rae

Probably Mandin. I love how much he cares for Nahim like an older brother.

Awesome!

@esther-c

That’s okay.

Offer’s open if you ever want to.

@hybridlore

Mandin and Nahim’s relationship is probably my favorite part. I enjoyed reading it a lot.

That’s good to hear! Those parts are usually the best parts to write. Of the two characters, who do you like better?

I’ll probably have the ninth chapter ready soon.

I don’t want to hurt anyone’s feelings. But I didn’t want to ignore what was said. I felt it was better to point out, instead of ignoring it. I’ve had conversations with multiple people from different backgrounds, and we tend to leave with more perspective than when we came. That was part of my intention, but I guess many people don’t have the…

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@ellette-giselle

You don’t have to answer anything I said…we can be done lol

I swear I wasn’t trying to argue…

Sara just gets confused and carried away sometimes so I’m sorry :/

@keilah-h

Yeah, I know.

That’s why I think we’re kind of done XD XD I did NOT mean for this to get blown up like this…

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

WHOA WHOA WHOA I DID NOT MEAN TO START A FIGHT.

Yeah that’s what I’m feeling too…XD I feel like actually horrible :/

but it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants.

I second that.

I wasn’t attacking your story or telling you you should change it…I just wanted to discuss this  a little bit because I love…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m not in any way trying to get you to believe how I believe! You don’t have to accept anything we’re saying…and I’m sorry if I made you feel that way. I think me and Whaley just like talking about stuff like this and we just saw this as an interesting topic to discuss.

It’s okay if you want to end it and I’m not going to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whether or not the marriage lasts, it’s important to have a healthy relationship with your partner. If the marriage lasts but it is a bad relationship, I would say it was a bad decision to get married.

Yes! I feel the same way!

It is possible to have a healthy marriage at a young age. You can do it. It is just hard to have a good o…

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@ellette-giselle

well I’ve read a TON of books about Christian marriages and Biblical courtship/dating and I have never read that! Plus, I have witnessed a TON of beautiful marriages that started very young and have gone on for years!

Okay. I’m sorry if I’ve offended you! I’m just telling you my perspective.

I’m not saying that ALL young m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay okay okay

Nevermind

XD

That’s just my personal opinion lol. I’m not saying you should do that, I was just saying how I feel. I don’t know…I just really really hate the idea of people getting married young, and I’m not sure why. So you do what you want with your story! See, this is why I need to stop looking at your book…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness, that looks so good!!!

Psstt, @freed_and_redeemed … 👆

@rae

I would if I could! But life is pretty busy right now and since sci-fi’s not my genre, I don’t really feel qualified to give good feedback. 😅

I know I said I was going to leave, but I’m just bored lol!

also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.

I agree with Keilah.

I know your story is set in medieval times, so th…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, Silvanis  is toned down too, cuz otherwise he’d be like: “I’m gonna find the one who brought me here! He’s got a date with my fangs!”

Actually…should I remove the blockers and let him go? I think it’d be funny!

@whalekeeper

does your friend’s dad have a cool hat?

If your friend’s dad doesn’t, we have a rawhide hat with re…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yes, it’s still the day before. Sorry, I’m not sure where everyone is either, except Violet and Alpha are somewhere on the school grounds, Nar is inside the school, upset. Chase is flying, Sef is hiding, and Jep is pursuing with El Burro, Johnny and one other person.

@calyhuge

Sorry, I didn’t see your rp.

Jep

“My, what small minds you boys have!” Jeptune cried to Johnny. “You’re like Chase! If he would just open up his mind a bit, he could unleash such power that he’d finally be a worthy opponent!”

“The eagle drops his mate at that place of sodas, Señora,” El Burro called. “Do we make chase?”

The third bo…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah, I’ve mostly run out of stuff to say too. I still have some fire left, but I believe this debate isn’t important enough to fan by embers…besides, knowing my track record, I’d probably say the wrong thing and start a wildfire…