Beth

@ellette-giselle

Got it.

@ellette-giselle

Jim giving Jonathan shoes. It was a sweet ending.

Ohh, right. But other people, maybe.

@ellette-giselle

Aww. That was sweet.

Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.

Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?

@rae Praying for you! 🙏🏻🩷

@esther-c

Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!

I will be sure to remember that on the next cliffhanger.

@ellette-giselle

True, true. 😆

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow. So you wrote those two this morning?

Darn. This means I can’t ask for bonus chapters. 😢 XD

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

How far through this draft are you? Finished?

@ellette-giselle

You didn’t like it before? Lol.

So how much of this have you written?

It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.

@ellette-giselle

I like Jim more and more…

Good chapters! I really like this book.

@rae Praying!!

Hi.

Prayers because my beef allergy is acting up in a different way than before which is a little scary (it’s not life-threatening, but it’s not fun either). We’re gonna set up doctor’s appointment tomorrow.

Thx.

@grcr

Aww, sorry girl! 😢 I’ll be praying for you throughout my evening. <33

@grcr

I’m sorry 😢 🤗 Praying!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, have fun!

@ellette-giselle

All I know is one of us is right…

Lolol!

Great quotes. He seems to have a lot of personality. XD

@ellette-giselle

I’ll have to listen to it later with my headphones!

@ellette-giselle

Hah, yes!

Sure! By the way, I liked the moodboards you already posted. Amber’s was really pretty. *is now remembering that name, and wonders when she is coming into the story*

I see similarities between Joseph’s story and this one. It feels like we’re going to time jump (also, you said that this story is about a young man……[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

KP just ate my post and went really weird…

I like Jim a lot.

I knew his parents were going to die once they hid Jonathan, but before that, no.

Does the story time jump after this, or does the whole book happen when Jonathan is nine?