@beth-torres
Active 2 weeks, 1 day ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
- Total Posts: 389
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 1 hour ago
Okay thank you guys!!! <33
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 1 hour ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 2 hours ago
Gotcha.
Love the section! Mainly just a few typos. The orphans are so sweet, and Asher found a girl! 🥰 Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 2 hours ago
Another question I have for y’all that’s more personal is if you’ve ever gone through a stage in your faith journey where you start questioning/doubting what you’ve been taught. Feel free to not answer this question though.
When I was about fourteen, (2ish years ago), out of nowhere —or what it seemed—I started having doubts about every…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 2 hours ago
OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 2 hours ago
(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Okay….
I have come to a decision lol
I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.
Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 3 hours ago
True.
Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 3 hours ago
*doubles over in agony*
Gahh! I’ve been struck! I’m dying! HELP ME SOMEONE!
I now have 650 words to write, and after that, you can bet you’ll be receiving a portion of my 26 snowballs (:<
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 20 hours ago
*saves snowballs*
Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 20 hours ago
To everyone who threw snow at me:
I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….
I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!
I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 20 hours ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 22 hours ago
*adds you to my revenge list*
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 22 hours ago
No. XD (Although that would be pretty funny if we didn’t know until now, LOL). I had just recently learned that y’all were related and guessing from the gibberish and the “PWR” at the end of the post, I figured it was Power. 😉😂
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 22 hours ago
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 23 hours ago
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Esther replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 3 days ago
Yeah, ok. Six MCs really isn’t terrible. I always find them interesting when they’re done well. (Not that I’ve specifically read any that didn’t do it well, buuut…. XD)
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 days ago
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