@beth-torres
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel Mai — The Protector
Gabriel untucked his shirt, cutting along the hem in a long strip, then cut another one. He pulled the vial disinfectant from his pocket. “Hold still.” He took her arm, trying to be gentle, but he knew it would sting. He silently cursed himself for leaving salve in his cottage and not slipping it into h…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded, backing closer to the door, before spinning around, tumbling inside with Lucy and shutting the hatch, darkness enveloping them as the crow’s talons scraped against the rough metal, their screeches of frustration cutting through the fog outside.
Inside, the air was stale but strangely w…[Read more]
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RAE's profile was updated 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Yes, I do every year, except this year because my Mom made canned cranberry sauce…hence why I didn’t eat it because it wasn’t the recipe I like.
I don’t eat it on anything, just straight cranberry sauce.
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RAE replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 months, 3 weeks ago
In Guardian Angels
my beloved flopNahim, in his earliest form, was a broken soldier finding healing. At first he was just another character, but eventually, as I got older and hit troubles in my life, I began to morph him into something that resembled some of my thoughts and feelings. He became almost a way of self-expression over the years, b…[Read more] -
RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
Thanks.
But stubborn me still hates it (it’s a me problem, I am genuinely thankful)
Also, I really, reall…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded, his jaw tight, knowing Lucy couldn’t get there in time. He judged the distance, and the closeness of the crows, but before he finished thinking, he sheathed his daggers and scooped Lucy up, apologizing, remembering how she kicked him last time. Then he ran for what felt like the m…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
It, indeed, was Lucy. She tumbled unceremoniously from the mass of black feathers. The crow shifted its attention from the shiny silver, to her, and she ran, the crow chasing after her.
Gabriel’s blades were out in a moment, boots digging into the ground as he r…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The problem is not what I want to write, I just genuinely hate my writing style right now.
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
As the crows above cackled and argued, Gabriel’s attention was drawn to something silver falling from the tower. A crow dived after it, and among its black feathers was a spot of color on its back. Gabriel cal…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m so sorry, Sara, but I’m so glad that Jesus has been comforting you during this time! It is truly amazing to hear of how the Lord is taking care of you right now. You’re in our prayers *hugs*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Yesterday afternoon, my mom passed away. She’s with Jesus now, and I’m very joyful about that, but I miss her a lot, too.
Something really cool happened though! Saturday night, my cousins on my dad’s side came to visit my mom, and when we went home, one of them spent the night in my room just for fun, and so did my sister.
I’d been going through…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
LOLLLL! Yes!
Why do you think I didn’t eat any Cranberry Sauce of Thanksgiving??
(fr though, it was because I’m a picky person about recipes, and it was the wrong recipe)
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Really not my best work, his lips are wayyy to small
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I finished this…and then realized it was terrible…
Not any of my ocs, btw, this was a trade for someone on Unvale

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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
And after over 12 hours, I return.
I had to pull out a plot device
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
The shadowy form of the bird faded slowly into the mist, and Gabriel’s heart sunk. He couldn’t wait, he’d have to hope the crow kept its steady direction, and enter the maze to pursue it. He adjusted his mask, pulling the red ribbon t…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
It might be a little bit before I reply, I need to think and my brain has died. Sorry 🙁 .
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel has ornithophobia now. I’m making this so hard for him
So mean lol. My poor innocent little charrie
All good, I’ve done worse to him…
Gabriel Mai — The Protector
Gabriel swung up the wall on the ampitheatre again, watching the bird fly away, looking over the many passages of the maze, hoping to find a way to follow. As…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you everyone 💜💜💜
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
omc like when we were doing the Character Party RP…that was insane, like I would check KP at least 10 times every day 😭😂
ik what you mean…writing’s been hard for me lately :/and I’ve been busy too!
i love pulling up old discussions and reminiscing old times…not to mention making my…[Read more]
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