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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Overall, it was pretty good. Some of the dialogue towards the end felt a tiny bit clunky, though.
Very well,”” Eric sighed. “I shall bare the displays of emotion for tonight, but by tomorrow hugs will be limited to once a month.”
This is funny, but it sounds old-fashioned all of a sudden. Is Eric just teasing? Does he lapse i…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
1. It gives the reader more hope in a happy ending.
2. It’s more interesting because you play on the past events of the book to make readers think Asher and Eric will die, but then defy the stereotype, keeping them on their toes.
3. It saves Asher and Eric. 🤗
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
YES! Much better. Thanks so so much!
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HighScribe changed their profile picture 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay! An excuse to talk about Andrew!!!!!!!
- He’s really really really adorable, and I will not hear otherwise!
- He has the best smile EVER, EVER
- He likes nicknames apparently (really adorable)
- He’s the most gentlemanly guy you’ll ever meet
- He thinks his jokes are stupid when they’re actually hilarious (I just…
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Esther replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ok! Thanks for the offer! 🤗
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HighScribe changed their profile picture 1 year, 9 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t think I’ll join, thanks for the offer, though (:
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
I love that!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Finally I have something I like enough to post!

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Esther replied to the topic Question about religion in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
Everyone else had some fantastic points and I agree. God does everything with a purpose, and one of those purpose is to bring glory to His name. The angels were made to do God’s will and serve Him, right? Satan didn’t want to, yet time and time again we see Satan’s plans thwarted and God glorified. I like how Andrew put it:
God knew…
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Ruth changed their profile picture 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
My older sister used to raise rabbits!
we raise silver fox rabbits!
I had an allergy to beef for a while, so we started raising rabbits for meat. Though, now they’re basically pets.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
YESSSSSS!!! We convinced you!!! 🙌🙌
Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I can’t wait to see the new scene! 😁
having hybridlore on the protection squad is scary! Why did I ever tell her about it?
Because you wanted me to kidnap all your characters. MWAHAHAH.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
*graciously accepts confetti and medal* Thank you, thank you very much.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@koshka YES. Thank you.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m the dangerous one? You’re the one with like, a 50% character mortality rate. 🤪 I feel sorry for your characters.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
WHOOHOO!!!!! 🥳🎉
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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