@beth-torres
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
 Cassius
Cassius watched as Gabriel lay down like an animal. “You look like Leander.” Cassius said plainly. “You should sleep straight with your back on the ground. Your pillow should lift up your head, that will hurt your neck. And you should have a small blanket or pillow underneath the curve of your back.” Cassius pointed…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
If there’s enough interest, we could try to plan one for late May/early June.
@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
@whalekeeper @stephie @loopylin @grcr @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @anyone-i-forgot
Is anyone up for a call sometime soon? We could try for the 2…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Have you ever given a charrie of yours a weird mannerism that you have yourself?
A few of my charries like to sleep in a fetal position, or curled up around a pushie or blanket. And Gabriel stretches similar to a cat. Mannerisms I sometimes have.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper
The Protector—Gabriel
The scent of the smoke invaded Gabriel’s nostrils. It sickened him, but he remained silent, listening to Cassius’s talk about pleasure. Internally, he wondered if happiness and pleasure were different, and if they were, how were they different. A small plop sound woke him from his thoughts. H…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Cassius and Leander
Cassius woke up. He looked up at the two sitting there. He walked behind them silently. “I do not wish to disturb your bonding, but I smell smoke. Perhaps an imbecile lit part of the maze on fire.” Cassius said with little worry or anxiety in his tone. “I suggest we lea-” Cassius stopped and looked down at the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
How did the doctor visit go?
The Protector—Gabriel
Gabriel hesitated, before sitting on the stone, bringing his knees up to his chest. He tensed at the slightest noises, eyes darting to where Cassius and Leander slept. “Uh… so do you want me talk like the Protector, or like…my other persona? Or just not talk at all.”
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Yay!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle
It’s Tuesday! I have two new chapters for you guys.Â
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Ruth replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’ll see if I have time. I have rowing to do, plus I’m looking into getting a job this summer as well as taking the first steps to getting my driver’s permit since I’m turning 16 end of July and would like to get my permit as soon as possible. If I have time, I’d be interested!
Not sure what I’d write yet though…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I will join if other people are interested!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
You’re really just going to leave me hanging like that?? 😳
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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
It sounds like a super fun idea! I don’t know if I’ll participate this time, though, since I’m kind of in the middle of my WIP and already have some people critiquing it. Thanks for the invite! Oh, and like Ellette said, if you happen to need some outsiders toÂ
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Barnes is self’s >:[    (XD)
Ooops! What I meant to say was “Barnes is selfish >:[”
No “self’s!” +O+ she is SO self’s!!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.
Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.
What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
 Cassius and Prince Leander
“I can tell you are attempting to lift my spirits. But it doesn’t matter.” Cassius had his hand covering part of his face. “But I’ll tell you know… that doesn’t matter. My spirits are always comfortable at lukewarm. They will never go up nor down.” Cassius yawned. “Now. Let’s get some sleep.” His…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper
The Protector—Gabriel
“Yes, my birthmarks aren’t a mental illness, but that doesn’t mean that people don’t hate me, or judge me. If I was not the Protector, if I didn’t wear the mask, if I didn’t hide the birthmarks, I would have been killed by the people I protect everyday.” Gabriel clears his throat again, v…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Barnes is self’s >:[ Â Â Â (XD)
@rae and Whaley
Cassius and Leander
“It’s not the same thing as my mental illness.” Cassius said dully. “Those birthmarks don’t defect your behavior. They don’t cause others to hate you and judge you. My three selves may not share memories. But we do share emotions. That is why I like Princess Ce…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Is Marcel here? Because if he is, he might get pelted with apologies from Chase
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper
Well, I guess it’s a go for finalizing the sketch and then coloring it. I have a few coloring choices I’m deciding on. I might add a starry backdrop, and make his hair silver, or just do like it’s daytime. That’s why the top part of the page is devoid of anything at the moment.
Tbh, after an experience…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@whalekeeper @the_lost-journal
The Protector—Gabriel
“So it wasn’t a flippant reason after all. That’s surprising.” Gabriel’s voice sounds young again. His hand moves towards his own mask, hesitates, then slightly dislodges it. A small sliver of skin showing a small cluster of strange birthmarks on his jaw, could be seen. He shows them to C…[Read more]
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