SIR FRANKENFURT the 3RD

@jonas

My favorite is Chromancy, but I also like Chromamancy, Prismathurgy, and Spectrathurgy. For some reason the sole “t” and “l” sounds bother me when placed in front of “urgy”.

@jonas

I think I like Spectrachromy/lurgy the best. I also like Chromamancy.

@keilah-h

hm, so you aren’t working for shadow? Are you in debt to him? Maybe he is blackmailing you? The only reason someone would want to know that info is for the dark emperor shadow

@grcr

oop huge typo 😂 I forgot to type a lot of stuff 😂😂

Thanks!

@linus-smallprint

😁

@keilah-h

… uh…… *steps back* did he send you? Are you working for him?! *begins to slowly back away* he did didn’t you! *Looks around* he is always trying to get the secret! Don’t you know what he wants to do!? DON’T YOU KNOW HIS EVIL PLANS?! Or did he trick you too! *Looks down, and closes eyes*

I-i have to go! And you will never get my…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

thx.

I did have a scene before this one, but I didn’t deem it ready for posting, since there are a few things I want to smooth out first. Hopefully that scene will make it flow better.

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @whalekeeper @keilah-h

Sorry for not posting in eight days. I hit Writer’s Block while trying to edit the next story to go on here and writing the next one 🙁

I’m not sure how long until I can post the full thing, but until then, I’m gonna post a snippet of the next…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for getting back! I will try to make it slower! 😁

and I will only share the other projects!

@jonas

That is just one of the 6 stories in it (it is the shortest one) Other stories in A Cellar’s tales are about a lot of different things, here are some of the names:

Security logs

Hallucinations

Friendly face

and two other

But I heard it does connect to the other stories. So the questions will be answered! But in some of the other st…[Read more]

@theshadow

Sorry it took me a day to get back to you. Even though you said you didn’t like this first chapter much, I think it has potential. It introduces the characters and their world pretty well. It is a very short chapter. Is that normal throughout the book, or is this the exception? It’s fine to have shorter chapters, but I think it might…[Read more]

@esther-c Gotcha! A P.S. would be fun, but it might lessen the impact of the ending, so it depends on what you do. As it is right now, it doesn’t scream “actual letter” to me. It’s kind of like a thank-you-note (not exactly, but I don’t know how else to explain it.) or just a note. With a word count as short as yours, that’s fine, but maybe it’d…[Read more]

Should I tag some people!? I guess so.  ^^^^^^

@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas

hello, hybrid lore told me to tag people if I wanted them to give feedback over my stuff, so if you guys wouldn’t mind, could you judge my story? Thanks! 😅

(it is…[Read more]

@keilah-h

same.

where’d you get them from?

What were you asking for? sorry.

@the_lost-journal

OMG!!!!

Richarded

I did not mean that! I MEANT TO PUT RICHARD!!!!!

NOT THE OTHER THING

@keilah-h

thx

@hybridlore

Thanks! I will make sure to remember that 😅

horror is not for everyone!

but thanks!

@hybridlore

It looks great! This was a cool idea. I think you did a good job inserting a theme into such a tiny paragraph. Out of curiosity, how much do you have left in the word count?

Thanks!! Oh yes, that was so hard! I was going to keep it lighthearted and goofy, and then I was like, Hold on. And tried something a little different. 😛

Ummm… a…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Wow, that was creepy. I guess I don’t like horror. But it was pretty well-written, I think. It was cool how you tied the ending into the beginning.

If you want feedback faster in the future, I would tag people, otherwise your post gets buried underneath all the other topics and we have to go scrolling for it. Although, if you e…[Read more]

@theducktator

Lolol! I would ask @jonas since he’s the leader of the Adventure one. I don’t know who’s in charge of the others… I’m sure @whalekeeper would know.