@beth-torres
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcurious
“Rideable?” Marcurious screeched. “If you think I will allow you to ‘ride’ me like a horse, than you are sorely mistaken!” the man glared at him. “Fine. But you will not ride me.”
So Marcurious closed his eyes and changed into a large eagle. Before the man knew what was happening, Marcurious launched up and grabbed the man…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh, and I don’t know what the theme color would be, probably light blue/gray? Idk, you can decide.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Hey, do you want to make another one for Lilitu?
He has black hair with blue streaks in it, he has a twisted foot so he limps a lot. He was saved from the river as a baby because his parents set him adrift to save him from being kidnapped by the Pythonos. He was rescued and adopted by a loving couple. He has a crush on Sef but can’t…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Vethe
Vethe ran down hallways and dodged around corners, looking for a way out.
Suddenly, something whistled past her ear and embedded itself in the wall. A knife.
Great. She thought, turning another corner and dodging another flying knife. You’re dead, Vethe. You are so dead.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcurious
He watched in awe as Vethe was choked by a black vapor. Cool! Well, it wasn’t cool for Vethe, but seriously, those king’s powers were awesome! Except the fact that he almost killed someone, but still…
“Fetch her! You will not, I can,” the king said.
Marcurious seriously did not want to be Vethe right now…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
*materialized out of nowhere and hits subscribe button before melting stealthily back into the shadows*
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Koshtin
“Fetch her! And you will not, I can.”
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
😭😭😭😭😭😭 (oh dear, I almost put a barfing emoji in there)
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I didn’t want to make a topic for this, but wanted to write it anyways…
The sound of drums seemed to shake the very foundation of the vacation house. Nae looked innocently up the set of winding stairs that led to Jr’s room with her large, childish eyes.
“Da, why is Junior trying to bring the house down with his drums?” Nahim gathered up his…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh no XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Vethe
Vethe coughed, rising to her feet. “I don’t think you and I are going to get along very well.” She said, laying a hand on her sword. “You don’t strike me as a very good king.”
And with that she ran.
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Congratulations, Koshtin, it seems like Vethe’s going to defect without even fighting the heroes 🤦♀️
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Ruth replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Okay, here is the current headache of the year…
Nahum-Alpha Slit Silvanus Thurston Dare Krogen Fives Grath
Warning, the arrangement may change later and I might add another name!
Now I shall disect his name! Each part has a meaning to his parents (he was their first child, so he got loaded on with meaning)
Nahum-from his father’s adoptive f…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
You guys have already read the next chapter, the one where Lilitu steals the loaf of bread. So I’ll skip to the fourth chapter, when Lilitu’s walking home from his thievery, lol
And as always, don’t feel like you have to read it. I don’t want anybody panicking, lol
Chapter 4: Strange Magick
Lilitu stood at the edge of…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic One More Chance – A Story by R.A.E. in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Not really a storyline, more like just points.
- Brandt saves Brenna, a slave/his Sweetheart
- Brandt’s leaders and fellows
- Brandt’s mission that he fails, falls and breaks his leg. Wounded.
- Elderly man takes him in, caring for him, not afraid to share beliefs.
- Brandt returns to fellows, overcome with guilt, pain, sorrow, depression,…
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Ruth replied to the topic Oh Arabian, my poetry in the forum Poetry 2 years, 10 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Oh Arabian, my poetry in the forum Poetry 2 years, 10 months ago
It’s as a Vow, and It’s as a Rule
A little child’s first cry,
It’s little voice piercing the sky.
It’s as a vow and it’s as a rule,
That life should spring forth fresh and new.
A little toddler with feet so small,
Pads down the grass that is so tall.
It’s as a vow, and it’s as a rule,
That life should be given to you.
 …[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
“A hero is the one who bleeds, red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.”
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Two things. How is your aunt? And how is your Scoliosis going?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic One More Chance – A Story by R.A.E. in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, I was a little worried about that…do you think it would help if I gave Brenna’s master a name? The young soldier must remain unnamed, for my own reasons, but I could give the master a name. I’ll rearrange the paragraphs so it’s easier to understand what’s going on.
Yeah, I think that would help a lot.
For the title, maybe “Murderer”?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
you’re fine!! no worries! 🙂
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