Beth

@kydonandwillow

I love it!! Onnnneeeee thing that stood out to me was this line (and please take my comments with a grain of salt):

He thought of his sister’s gentle, quiet spirit, and his restless, fiery one and shook his head. Sometimes he didn’t believe that they were related.

There’s nothing inherently wrong with it, but it’s kind of going a…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I’m so sorry you’re going through this Min!! I’ll be praying too!! ❤️❤️

@mineralizedwritings

Hey. I’m really sorry you’re having a hard time. I’ll be praying ❤️😔

@kydonandwillow

1. People like myself, honestly. My sister pointed this out because Willow is how I am around strangers. But Kydon is how I am around my siblings and good friends at 3 a.m.!

That’s awesome! (Totally understand hanging with friends/siblings late at night. It can be dangerous 🤣) Those characters sound like so much fun!!

2. Janner! F…

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@thearcaneaxiom

You’ve done it again… my brain is broken 😂

From what I understand, that sounds like a cool idea, though!

@jonas

Lol 😂😂😂

@jonas

Oh, yeah, oops. Yeah, that was the original name. It was far too similar to Voidbringer, which was not something I wanted XD.

Maybe I’ll do that…

I’ll add a couple tags.

And you guys feel free to ignore this if you’re not interested.

@whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @euodia-vision @can’tthinkofanyoneelseatthemoment

@thearcaneaxiom

Oh, yeah!! Ofc.

I have a few, but I’ll share the one that’s the most complete.

Also, I’ll note that a lot of this magic system was literally created last week, but several ideas date back quite far.

The magic system doesn’t actually have a name yet… (I guess I should probably figure that out lol).

Conduits:

A Conduit is the…[Read more]

@jonas

Creating a new thread is probably the easiest method.

@jonas

Do you need help figuring out images?? It had me stumped for a while, too.

@jonas

Oh, really?? Ok, I guess it’s 15.

@jonas

Bumbling Henchman= less that 20 posts

Charismatic Rebel= 20-85 posts

Wise Jester= 100-200 posts

I don’t remember what’s next.

Knight in Shining Armor= 300-1000 posts

Eccentric Mentor= 2000-3000 posts

Chosen One= 3000+ posts

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool!! This all seems very well thought out!!

@kydonandwillow

Welcome to Kingdom Pen!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!

Time for some questions!

1. Who’s your favorite character to write? Why?/What are they like?

2. Who’s your favorite character from either a movie/tv show or book/series?

3. If you c…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

No not really, but I’ve heard of both of them before. It sounds like you’d recommend them…?

@godlyfantasy12

There are a couple things that have helped me in situations like this.

First, try to mentally plot backwards. You don’t have to write stuff out or make an outline, unless you think that will help you more. But start at one point, somewhere in the middle or even the end and work backwards. How did they make it here? What did t…[Read more]

@jonas

oops I meant the FIRST.

@jonas

WOW. That was a lot, so I didn’t read it in complete detail, but that sounds awesome!! I think the second one is my favorite too.

I’ll share one of mine later. All the info for it is on my computer.

@jonas

Hi! Welcome to kingdom pen!!

I’m hybridlore, a Christian homeschooler, violinist, and science fiction/dystopian writer (most of the time).

Awesome that you’re @highscribeofaetherium‘s sister! My sister joined a while ago but she kind of disappeared from here, lol.

I’ve been writing for almost 5 years. Despite that, I haven’t ever compl…

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