Beth

@keilah-h

Yes, he’s my own sci-fi character.

He would understand a mandalorian character the most, since they and the Realn are very similar in some way. They do have a different language and traditions though, so they aren’t the same. Armor is different too. But the Warrior people vibe with an Honor code is there.

Yeah, a crystal sword is a…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings  @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @rae

Hedieh

Hedieh did a quick twirl in front of the mirror, watching the skirt of her dress spin around her. She bounced on her toes, happy to be wearing the sparkling, baby pink ball gown. It was her favorite color.

She did one last check of her hair and makeup, then…[Read more]

@wanderlust

Hello. K, so if you’re on the ‘recent topics’ page, click the ‘forums’ link above all the topic threads. That’ll take you to a new page. Near the top, right below the ‘general site info’, there’ll be a link that says ‘start here’. Click the link, and scroll to the bottom of the page. There should be a white box with a smaller one…[Read more]

@sara

Wait, am i supposed to bring his fiancee in too?

NAHIM

Nahim never liked foggy, eerie woods. The shadows the crooked trees made in silver moonlight always set his warrior side on edge. And it was even more weird when he saw yellow rectangles and heard the sound of music.

“What in the Galaxies? One minute I’m flying, and the next, I’m here. But, where is here?”

He looked around him, there was…[Read more]

@sara

okay, i get it now.

Uh, no he never wears a cloth suit except for his wedding, and like a few other times. But, he does wear another type of suit. What if your character happens to wear a suit of armor? Almost complete 24/7? Anyway, whatever. he’ll just pop in and we’ll see how crazy it gets when a Realn steps in.

@smiley

Yeah! Oh, come to think of it, I am a lot like Zoe and Olivia as well.

I remember Tony and Brianna (I love the name Brianna)! I miss them, and the Mulligans (especially Lisa and Nick).

What happens to Kelly? I miss her!

@jonas

Well, I haven’t totally developed his character yet, but I know that he gets a lot of his confidence from relying on himself and that he can basically do anything he wants in Erstonia, so he’s kind of entitled. To be honest, I’m not sure what would really scare him, except the Pythonos. He’s not scared of them at the moment, but he will…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah, I get that people can’t do the show anymore so they stop doing the character, but I agree that they should bring back characters. I wonder what Jared would be like as an adult? I know they had one episode where he was on a phone call during Candid Conversations, but he should be in an actual main part.

Ooh, what about Rodney,…[Read more]

@smiley @sarafini @trailblazer

I’m not sure if this is an RP or not…but if it is….I want to be Jules or Valerie. Unless one of you guys has any ideas for new characters I can RP. I know we all hate Valerie (well, hate’s a little extreme, but you know what I mean), so I want her to be a sympathetic villain arc, lol. I can show why she does…[Read more]

@trailblazer

One of my favorites:

“I’m not a singer. I’m a child of God who happens to sing.” I actually found this one on a KP article, and I replaced the sing with write! So it goes, “I’m not a writer. I’m a child of God who happens to write”.

Also, the one in my signature.

“Every page has a flaw only the author sees.”

@trailblazer

*me casually butting into the conversation*

Hiiii!

Lucy’s a good one! I’m kind of a goody-two-shoes as well (I still don’t get why people say that’s a bad thing, haha!)

But I would probably be Aubrey Shepherd. She easily caves in to peer pressure (for me its not as extreme as her, its just it’s easy for me to gossip and act…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I have fixed the “connecting” issues on Reedsy, just not on KP.

I’m deleting the chapter where Sef and Lilitu are in the woods. Or at least for now, lol. I’m filling in the gaps a lot right now and fixing some stuff up.

@aranel

Yay, we have another Sara(h)!

But you spell your name wrong, lol. The correct way to spell it is actually Sara. haha!

(If you couldn’t tell, I am joking. Obviously, there’s no right or wrong way to spell it. I probably just ruined my own joke, but I can’t risk offending people on KP. I want to be friends with everyone, lol)

I’m going…[Read more]

@grcr

Yeah….

I’m glad I changed it.

@spinner4him

Here’s the link to my WIP.

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

If you have any critiques, please reply to this thread and tag me! Thanks for being interested in this! 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think I’ve fixed most of the problems we’ve discussed? Anything I need to work on in the “new” chapters?

@acancello @mineralizedwritings  @grcr @esther-c @trailblazer

Okay guys, so since Hugo and Ottoline are kind of a thing, I realized that they have a pretty big age gap. Hugo’s 16, and Ottoline’s only 13! I’m not a fan of age gaps like this during teen romance, so I’m moving Ottoline’s age up to 14/15 so it’s not as weird.

Ottoline

“Well, I…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Okay! Great! I’ll tag you in the thread.

@acancello

HE KISSED HER!!! OH MY GOSH!!!!!! 😍 😂 🤣

THAT IS SOOOOO SWEET!!!!!