@beth-torres
Active 8 hours, 13 minutes ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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hybridlore replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Wow, so much detail went into the backgrounds of your characters! I didn’t read it all completely but I skimmed it and it looks good!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Great job! Wait, does Riker play the violin? I might’ve asked that before, I can’t remember if it was him or someone else XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m fine either way!! I would like to see more of Chester, though. I feel like you just added him in, unless I’m remembering wrong?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
The dory one XXD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Hmmm, that’s a hard one.
I mean, Chester’s more mature, and Libbie actually likes him. So Chester and Libbie makes more sense…but the rebel in me wants to say Albert and Libbie, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Fracture
The girl hesitated. Finally, she said, “No.”
“You’re not terrified of me?” Fracture was stunned. “I don’t understand!” He began to panic, pacing back and forth. “I knew I needed a monologue! I knew this would happen! Now all because of lack of a monologue, I’m….normal! This explains everything!”
He sank to his knees and buried his…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago

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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago

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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
I didn’t find this one on my own, it was sent to me, but it’s great!

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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago

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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
@grcr @spinner4him @jonas @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @devastate-lasting @power @anyone randomly looking at my profile.
I would like some serious criticizing on this scene. I don’t want to hear anything like “It’s good” I want to hear stuff like, “It needs help here…” “It’s fine here…” I don’t…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I believe Hugo could also read and write English.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
Striking, dodging, lundging, falling, blocking, missing, caring, running through.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago

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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae @highscribeofatherium @acanello
Hedieh
Hedieh’s eyes lit up as she watched the two men begin to fight. Wow, this escalated quickly. Fighting didn’t bother her much, but with these two, it could be much worse than a good-hearted duel.
She glanced down at an old sword lying in the corner. Just in case, she reminded herself, trying to igno…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
Splitting headache was right. Nahum’s head was complaining about the sudden movements. But he kept on, dodging, blinking, striking, missing. He studied the style Zahlin fought. It is good, skilled, practised, expieranced. He didn’t hold his blade like he had learned more recently, no, Zahlin was taught when he was…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
That is very accurate XD. (Just don’t tell Fracture I said that. lol)
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I think the second part flows pretty well!
This paragraph, “Something impacted Nahim’s armor about six inches above where his plate ended at the bottom of the rib cage. There was a boom and a flash from the object. Nahim drew his gun and aimed into the fog. His helmet searched for some signature from the person who had shot at him, but it could d…[Read more]
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