@beth-torres
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Ruth started the topic One More Chance – A Story by R.A.E. in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Hello.
I’ve recently been wishing I could write more short stories, and finally I sat down at my computer today and started typing. Following is the first part of One More Chance. Critics are the thing I want.
1 ~ “You are a murderer”
A long caravan of horses, camels and people, some riding on the backs of the animals, some with hands tied,… -
Ruth replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago

Glace
The eyes look weird cuz I had to paste the irises in and I’ve never done that before…Any tips on how to do that better?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Glad you like it! Of course!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Chase Duke
Chase hung back as Fynn greeted a blue girl, her horse ad what guessed to be his really really close friend. I don’t belong here. He quickly pulled his hood over his face again, hoping the two girls and odd horse wouldn’t notice him. He slouched against the wall, watching as the four talked.
The horse interested him the mo…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 10 months ago
@thearcaneaxion
Thanks for the reply
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
yeah, sorry, My brain kinda died.
No, you’re fine. XD
Fynn
Fynn shoved his hands into his pockets as they fell into an awkward silence. Thankfully, he didn’t have to come up with anything to say as he saw Callista by the front doors standing next to a girl with blue hair and horse of the same color.
“Hey, Callie!”
She looked up and smi…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
I like your forum signature.
@everyone
Robert Robinson
6’2″. Brown hair with blond highlights, tanned skin, blue eyes.
Used to be MC of the Solomon Team but I got rid of that book, it actually was a historical fiction, not a sci-fi or fantasy.
Robert was born July 28th, 1975 to Richard and Rachel Robinson. When he was six, h…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
OH MY GOSH I LOVE THAT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you!!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Here you go! Feel free to make any changes, I’m not sure if it’ll let you in that link but you can save it and edit.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Koshtin
“How can I trust you? You have given me no reason to believe that you would be telling the truth. Aside from the fact that you want us to murder these Lillenings, which honestly gives me even less reason to trust you.”
Koshtin smiled at her his twisted smile.
“My rebel lady, which of the twelve planets are you…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
btw, Fynn and Lukas are friends, not brothers.
Oops.
(I think after a couple more RPs, I’m gonna have Fynn find Callista who’s with Sara’s Livia. If you’re good with that.)
Yeah, that’s fine.
Chase Duke
Aletheia? Where on Adalland (this name will most likely change later) is there a city called Aletheia? Chase was never good at geogr…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 10 months ago
Is it my understanding of earlier debate that you are bouncing back and forth the idea of Is laying the hands on the head necessary for supernatural healing?
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh, ok. Gotcha
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Ruth replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, I have a charrie who’s like Nathan as far as the place he holds in my heart, his name is Robert Robinson, and I rarely talk about him, but he’s very special to me.
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Ruth replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
335!!!!! How long have you been creating charries? I don’t think I have that many…Unless you count the purple dragons and dust bees, I don’t think they count.
Wow, girl, that’s insane.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I like this chapter as well!
Thanks!
Yeah, I just wanted the chapter to end on an emotional climax. I kind of wanted short chapter breaks, because I don’t like it how in books some authors make like 40 page long chapters. I kind of like it in two different chapters for some reason.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Thanks!! She’s really fun to write. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, but I’m doing better now. Haha, ikr? XD The Captain America movies are amazing🤩
That’s good! 😊
Yesss! One time when I was babysitting, the little boy I was watching was taking a nap, so his parents had let me use their tv. I was watching the first Captain America movie and the captions were on and I didn’t know how to turn…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76
I forget too. XD We can just pretend Ami and Clint have met up with Bucky and Riya already, if you guys are ok with that.
(btw, Fynn and Lukas are friends, not brothers. 😉 Sorry I didn’t explain that earlier. 😅)
Fynn
“Thanks. I-I’m from Shyton.” Chase paused for a moment. “You?”
“Huh, never heard of Shyt…[Read more]
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