@beth-torres
Active 5 days, 23 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh, I forgot, I was interviewing Silvanis.
Alright Silvanis, what is one thing you carry with you at all times?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
To: Hugo Walton 40 Wildwood road. Windy Pines
From: Ottoline 887264 Lir, Andromeda
I don’t care if you have to go to jail….I’m literally in jail right now so I can’t judge you.
Hmm…I think I would like school.
Wow…that does not sound fun. Since you told me about torture….I’ll tell you to be fair so you don’t feel like…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic I'm beginning a novel….thoughts? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
This is an interesting start! The world is really interesting, and I like how you introduced the idea that everything is frozen over in the very first paragraph.
This is kind of nitpicky, but it’s what stood out to me the most: dialogue tags. I skimmed back over it, and I can’t find the word ‘said’ anywhere. Like I said, really…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
To: Hugo Walton 40 Wildwood road. Windy Pines
From: Ottoline 887264 Lir, Andromeda
A Pythonos is a race, similar to humans. They have dark magick and powerful spells and they run the UNIT (the place I’m in). Basically they’re evil incarnate. You don’t want to meet one, trust me.
What’s juvie?
I don’t really know what Math or any of…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Livia
Oh my gosh. How did he know??? She recalled herself thinking the exact thing about Lukas’ smile…breathtaking.
This was getting creepy. What was he, a mind reader or something?
“What do you want me to say?” Liv felt her cheeks grow even hotter. “I am so confused…what is this conversation?!?”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m so happy because today it’s 8 degrees! Me and my dad were joking that it was “blazing hot” outside, because it is…compared to what it has been! I walked outside and I was like “my eyes aren’t freezing! I can feel my face! It’s so warm outside!!!” lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
It does kind of sound like Hugo! lol
To: Hugo Walton 40 Wildwood road. Windy Pines
From: Ottoline 887264 Lir, Andromeda
Hi Hugo!
When the Pythonos gave me the letter, I was so excited to write back!
I’m fourteen. I don’t know if I have any siblings because I live in a horrible place where I get tortured almost every day by wacko…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
This is hilarious!!!
Fynn
He bit down on his lip, but a smile still crept onto his face. Poor Liv, he was just getting started. “Now some girls notice his smile more. He calls it lopsided, but I’ve heard a few say its breathtaking. He still doesn’t believe me.” He sighed and clicked his tongue. Lukas was going to hate hi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh I was asking Flaz 😅
Oh I love that so much 🤣 He has so much character within just a few sentences. XDD
I don’t know what else to ask him atm, so we’ll just leave it at that. XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Marcurious: Ottoline’s like a little sister to me…but she’s pretty cool for a mortal. I’m not sure if she admires my amazingness…I’d have to ask her.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
OH MY GOSH I’M DYING!!!
Liv
She choked on air and burst into a coughing fit. She hoped it would distract Fynn from the way her cheeks were blushing.
“Wow. I did not see that coming,” she made a face, purposefully avoiding Fynn’s question. In truth, she had noticed Lukas’s eyes…but Fynn didn’t need to know that.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
That’s awesome! 😂
I’ll ask him a question…
If you had to choose, who would you say is your least favorite quadruplet?
*sigh* Oh yes, the burdens of amazingness. Now I have to ask… Is there someone special who admires you and your amazingness more than anyone else?
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ooh, lovely idea, lol.
Fynn
Fynn looked over at Lukas again. “I can see why you like him though… I think his eyes are the real girl-catcher though. Have you noticed at all?”
Lukas’s eyes have central heterochromia. so there’s a ring of brown around his pupil and the rest of his iris is blue. Where the rings meet look…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Marcurious: I suppose so…nobody understands the trials of being so amazing and perfect in every way. It can be exhausting.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Flaz is a quadruplet?! I love that!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
(Oh my word, he’s great. 😂)
Yes, of course. Does this amazingness make it hard to converse with or understand those less amazing?
(I’m only fueling his ego, this is not good! 🤣)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Fynn could tease her about Lukas and make it super awkward…lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Marcurious: Then they are wrong. Anyone can see that I am amazing!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Fynn
He raised his eyebrows. “That’s one way to put it.”
I don’t know what else to write. XD We could wait for a little bit, or we could mix up partners again. Not everyone has to do that tho. Idk, whatever you wanna do, lol.
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