@beth-torres
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lukas
“Man… th-that must be, be tough. B-but I’m glad we’re able to be here for you.” He offered a smile. “Because if it was just you and Xandro, then Xandro might get you in trouble. You saw what he did to me.”
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Esther replied to the topic Hi, Peoples! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Cool!! I’ll have to check it out!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Liv
She inhaled sharply as Lukas briefly pulled her into his arms.
“Thanks,” she sighed, smiling at him, “I needed that. When Aubrielle died…” she sighed. “Our family just fell apart. My brothers and parents were distant, and I’d just felt so alone…and then they sent me to school. All I had was Xandro. It’s been a long time since…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
It’s just a short story, and it is meant to be simple. Often the simplistic things are the hardest. What I love to write are the things that draw out a certain trait, make the reader to stop and think, or are often not done.
Even though Blake is only planned to be for this story, the struggle of “am I a hero or a villain” is Alpha’s.
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Esther replied to the topic Hi, Peoples! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
My dream vacation would probably be to visit Africa, it’s just so beautiful!
That would be so cool!!
Of course, the first character to pop into my mind is Jack. He’s a man made out of yarn (long story lol), and he’s super clumsy and hilarious, but it’s partly a ruse to hide his guilt and loneliness. He also knows a lot mor…
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ooh, that sounds really neat, I’d definitely read something like this! I can’t think of any feedback to give rn. But yeah, I love the idea! Tag me if you end up posting it!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Honestly…I’m not exactly sure why that’s a problem XD I mean…technically…any story can be taken out of it’s original setting and put somewhere else, with only a few little tweaks. I could easily move my story to Earth, get rid of Andromeda, and just change the races to different groups of people.
And since technically…
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lukas
“Oh… Oh, I-I’m so sorry.” His eyes clouded with sympathy. He wasn’t the one who needed someone’s pity; at least Asher was still alive. He couldn’t imagine actually losing a sibling. He was still holding onto a hope that Asher would change his mind someday and come back. But Liv’s sister… she would never come back. I…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I haven’t edited it at all.
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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whoever
I just typed this out to get the jist of a short story idea. I’d like any thoughts or feedback, whether negative or positive. it’s called One Bullet
One Bullet
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh wow, Chase’s powers are cool :0
Thank you *bows* one of the many things that drove me crazy trying to figure out XD
@loopy
Usually my problems become my charries’ problems, not the other way around lol
Yeah, that happens too. Idk, I cry with Alpha when he looses Emmie, reject Gloria with Glace when he was banished, I’m sho…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
oh, and any injuries sustained in one of his forms, does transfer into his other forms.
He also technically can do magic, but that is even more dangerous and chancey than him shifting.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Actually they are from completely different Galaxies. Shyiads are more universal than Nagas though, since they can shift into almost any organic life form. Chase has ancient shyiad blood, but it is polluted by his manly blood. It is almost a miracle he can shapeshift, that’s how long ago the shyiad blood was introduced into his line. He…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Wow. Chase’s loyalties are really coming out.
Is it normal that as I was writing that rp, that my heartrate literally got faster and i almost felt genuine fear? Is it normal for writer’s in a character cloak to deeply feel the emotions of charries, or is it just me being more insane than usual?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin
Chase Duke
“It’s so dark,” Sef whispered. Chase drew her protectively against his body.
“It’s okay.” He hoped she couldn’t hear the panicked beat of his heart. He looked up at the sign, ignored the girl coming from nowhere, and spoke in a tone that sounded like a seasoned war veteran warning a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Only advice I have is just brainstorming. If you want it to be really unique, think of a different concept or idea that could maybe be tied into the story, but I don’t think it has to. If the plot and characters are good readers won’t care if the setting isn’t super distinct. Maybe @thearcaneaxiom could help? (Sorry if she already tagged you.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic hi it's meeeeeeee in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Hi, nice to meet you! I’m Hybridlore or just Hybrid, a homeschooled high school sophomore and YA science fiction writer. I didn’t read all the questions you got, so sorry if you’ve already answered these.
Favorite book?
What’s your WIP about?
What genre do you write and why?
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