@belegteleri
Active 6 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
- Total Posts: 97
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Daeus replied to the topic THE THING YOU WOULD HAVE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR IF YOU KNEW ABOUT IT (I assume) in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@belegteleri Good! We should be starting shortly
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Daeus replied to the topic THE THING YOU WOULD HAVE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR IF YOU KNEW ABOUT IT (I assume) in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Goody, now let me round in the other peeps. Hmm, let’s see.
@faithdk @hannah-olsen @vanna @overcomer @zoe-wingfeather @ingridrd
@adry_grace @cahndida-serkhaman @lightningmouse @anna-brie @hannah-krynicki @mas410 @gretald @ivy-rose @dbhgodreigns @the-happy-bookaholic @belegteleri @writefury @kate-flournoy @hannah-c @jenali @hislittlerose @wordfitly…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic THE THING YOU WOULD HAVE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR IF YOU KNEW ABOUT IT (I assume) in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Goody, now let me round in the other peeps. Hmm, let’s see.
@faithdk @hannah-olsen @vanna @overcomer @zoe-wingfeather @ingridrd
@adry_grace @cahndida-serkhaman @lightningmouse @anna-brie @hannah-krynicki @mas410 @gretald @ivy-rose @dbhgodreigns @the-happy-bookaholic @belegteleri @writefury @kate-flounoy @hannah-c @jenali @hislittlerose @wordfitlys…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic THE THING YOU WOULD HAVE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR IF YOU KNEW ABOUT IT (I assume) in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Goody, now let me round in the other peeps. Hmm, let’s see.
@faithdk @hannah-olsen @vanna @overcomer @zoe-wingfeather @ingridrd
@adry_grace @cahndida-serkhaman @lightningmouse @anna-brie @hannah-krynicki @mas410 @gretald @ivy-rose @dbhgodreigns @the-happy-bookaholic @belegteleri @writefury @kate-flounoy @hannah-c @jenali @hislittlerose @wordfitlys…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Beginnings make readers— endings make fans in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Well glad the topic was timely, @belegteleri! (Still can’t write that tag without smiling 😉 )
This is all to say that subtlety is the key to a strong character.
@Daeus— can I just frame that, and put it on my wall? 😀
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Greta replied to the topic MBTI in the forum Characters 8 years, 8 months ago
@belegteleri, Yeah, me too. 🙂 MBTI is fascinating.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Hey, writers! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
@belegteleri
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Adry_Grace replied to the topic In the words of the greatest spider in history: Salutations. in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
@belegteleri I am great at getting distracted… also procrastination. Yes to Team Cap! Down with all who call Bucky the villain. Just yesterday I was reading an interview about… No. Concentrate Adry.
Okay. Good. I’m not the only one who takes forever to get through LOTR. That means I can do this. Just as soon as I finish The Martian… I do…[Read more] -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
That’s strange you should say that, @belegteleri . I think you and I must have had a similar experience last year. I chose “emerge” for my word of the year then, because I was emerging out of a very dark place and back into the sunshine. It was both the hardest, and one of the best years of my life so far. I questioned whether or not God had…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
That’s strange you should say that, @belegteleri . I think you and I must have had a similar experience last year. I chose “emerge” for my word of the year then, because I was emerging out of a very dark place and back into the sunshine. It was both the hardest, and one of the best years of my life so far. I questioned whether or not God had…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Social Media in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@belegteleri Wow, there are a lot of Tania’s on there. 🙂 Could you maybe post a link so I could find you?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Caution: Further Procedure May Result in Allegorical Inspiration in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
Yes, @Belegteleri, totally agree! 🙂 Saying that a man can sincerely serve a false god (nothing more than a delusion of his own erring human brain) and through it serve the one true God in Whom he does not believe is the height of arrogant ignorance.
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Greta replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus, thanks! Great prompt idea. 🙂
@belegteleri, haha, love your story!
@writefury, love the squirrel. 😛 and @bluejay great story!
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@belegteleri Your doctor cracked me up! I never thought before about what really goes on in the mind of those doctors. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Talking to Myself in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
Oh yes @Belegteleri and @Daeus, I do that ALL THE TIME. Especially the ‘being interviewed’ one— I’ve lost count of how many times I’ve done that and on how many different topics. 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 9 months ago
Great poem @belegteleri. And my mum would love you. She’s always trying to teach us the difference between to and too; your and you’re; its and it’s and so on. (I’m at least getting better. :))
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Daeus replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 9 months ago
@belegteleri
That’s great your loving poetry. It is worth the effort for sure. This poem’s got a real “real” feel to it. The one thing I might focus on more is poetic imagery (smilies and metaphors). If one could master only one poetic technique, I think I would pick imagery. You’ll love playing around with it because imagery is just plain fun. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 9 months ago
Yes, the Teleri are fascinating, and poor Beleg is a wonderful character. *sigh* The best characters usually have the worst ends. :'(
So yeah, watch out for the long lines, and that’s pretty much it for this poem. You did good with the emotion— that’s always something I highly prize in a poem, and when it’s very raw and gripping I like it…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 9 months ago
Hey @belegteleri, this is a great poem! I loved it, which is saying a lot since I don’t usually go for free verse. The only thing I would say is watch out for the lines that are much, much longer than other lines, as that can tend to break up the flow.
By the way, I thought Beleg was a bowman, not a shipwright. *wink* 😉
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Ivy Rose replied to the topic Your Favorite Historical Fiction in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Wow! Looks like I have a LOT of reading to do…I haven’t heard of half of those books.
@belegteleri Yes! The Viking Quest series was good. I wish there were more books about vikings!
@sarah-h Twice Freed is one of my absolute favorites! Just about anything by Patricia St. John is amazing, though. Yes, Douglas Bond wrote the Crown and Covenant…[Read more]
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