Faith

@whalekeeper

Yesyesyesss 😆 I love this idea so much.

Now i just have to choose which charrie to put in… 😑

Ok, ok, umm…. I think I’mma go with Ev. Cuz… if he gets hurt it’ll probably be more his fault than yours, if you know what I mean. XD

I’m not sure how much you already know about him cuz you’ve seen him in rps… Should I just give you e…[Read more]

Haha, I accidentally tagged this topic with the line “Got Freedom’s tag wrong” XD that was supposed to be my edit excuse, not a tag! Silly me.

@rae

That’s cool! I forgot Jr had magic too

Sometimes you gotta feel it out.

Oh and just to clarify, the words that I suggested should be taken out shouldn’t be taken out every time they’re in your prose. It’s just a good rule of thumb to follow, not some law. Just wanted to make that clear. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

I was just about to ask how you were doing when I saw this in my inbox! Glad you’re back!!

Um, I don’t think so. It’s a new day though.

@trailblazer I don’t know much about this time period, but I really enjoyed it so far! It does draw you in.

I feel like it’s hard to have character development within one chapter, but I’d be interested to see where this goes! Please tag me if you post more ! 😉

@trailblazer

Hello! I’d love to give feedback! 🥰

1, does it draw you in and make you want to read more?

I drawn in by the character relationships! Knowing this is the first draft, I think it could be better if we jumped into the relationships before the historical events. I’ve read some classic his-fics (Johnny Tremain, five out of five stars),…[Read more]

@rae

I knew how Nar would be, though I also had never written her POV, but Jr is like…trying to describe the taste of mango without saying mango. Nearly impossible!

Relatable 😖 What helps me is to find some solid values and then play them out in an interesting way.

Not that I’ve written her much here, but Babs is a type 6 and wants security for h…[Read more]

@rae

Hehe sorry I’m just making dumb jokes.

I totally get enjoying the company of animals more than people, and he probably is even better with them since he’s a shapeshifter, right?

@loopylin

*tries to hide an undignified snort* hehehehehe

@rae

Don’t worry, Chase doesn’t have to be in the newspaper club if it doesn’t make sense for his character.

listening to squirrel gossip, and stroking the coat of the fawn.

It’s official. Chase is a Disney princess.

I think his fragility will wax and wane XD Right now he’s strong.

@loopylin

I have no idea if any of my characters would like to write, but maybe they’ll chip in 😀

@rae

I am working on Ben’s voice because I’ve never written his POV, so please give me grace XD I’m testing this and that. The problem is, for he first book, he is literally nine years old in physical age and was way more gentle and fragile, so I’m trying to decide how much of that should carry forward ;P

Ben

“But I just came from…” Ben…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHHHH HANS 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Noooooo not another one to sob over 😭😭😭😭😭

🥺🥺

@mineralizedwritings

Tysm for asking I really appreciate it! Yeah, it feels like it’s been forever.

Ofc girl! 💖 Yeah it really does.

And girl I’m so sorry 🥺 I know that must be so scary and overwhelming. I’m praying for you ❤ I wish I was better at saying encouraging things…but just know that you are loved and worthy of love no matter what. We…[Read more]

@liberty

Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yessss, awesome idea!! love it 😎 And it will always give our charries something to do if the RP slows for a little bit. XD