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@koshka

Yayy! *Barnes is knocked off balance by the ball and falls to the ground*

@ellette-giselle

YIPPY!

(though Rory won’t think so lol)

Hehe I thought not

oh no! what happened?

I’ve depended too much on arm strength and I have whiplash from trying to grab my opponents. I also have really bad circulation so that isn’t any help. :’)

It might take me a bit to reply because my hands are trembling really bad tonight, but Barnes would really appreciate it. XD

@ellette-giselle @koshka

I’m here, you can connect with Barnes and get moving together.

@liberty

I will have 24 snowballs soon, and then people will suffer!😈

@hybridlore

Lol, it does sound like that. It’s a Christmas song.

Yay, Wyoh didn’t eat those words! You have no idea how glad I am. *sweats*

@linus-smallprint

I have… a lot of feedback. *coughs*

Thank you Linus for giving me access to this story! I have a lot of thoughts and I hope they can be of some use to you! Obviously these are my opinions, so use them as you will. 🙂

Characters:

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Love Tyn. H…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I had a school book once with that analogy. A couple more: The boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way a bowling ball wouldn’t. She walked into a room like a centipede with 98 missing legs.

Oh, dear, I still have 600 words to write.

@whalekeeper

I just realized I can’t actually flip my hair because I have a bob cut. 😐

Sad. *flips hair* XD

@smiley

*screeches* I typed out a whole reply and it got eaten! I’ll type it out again sooo.

@linus-smallprint

Thank you! Yes, Zuko was my favourite, along with his Uncle Iroh. I love redemption arcs, and Zuko’s was very well done.

Yayy!! We should totally make (or revitalize) a topic for that show. This forum needs to experience some great fanart for AtLA, and you are definitely the best artist for the job.

@ellette-giselle

I’m aware that it is real, and I would never go to a seance or something, but this particular magic is made up, and it isn’t like occult magic. I do think that fantasy magic in general is harmless, (though most of the fantasy I read is Christian and/or middle grade so it doesn’t get that dark), though maybe not this one since it…[Read more]

I might write a fuller explanation about what I believe about this matter (taking into account what Ellette said about putting images into the reader’s mind), but the gist of it is that someone is always going to be bothered by this.

Linus has made a very harmless representation of magic. This is just imagery of humans developing animalistic t…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

AAH it’s Zuko!! I love Zuko so much. Well done; you translated the anime-like style of the show to your own interpretation, and it looks great! Was he your favorite character?

@ellette-giselle

The difference with the graphic murder/adultery thing is that those are real, while Linus’ magic system is made up. Thinking about murder and adultery is different than thinking about pretend magic.

@linus-smallprint

I didn’t have a problem with the magic images. Since this is fiction, I don’t think readers will attempt to do the magic, since it is evil, and unless the images are actually based on occult magic, I don’t see any harm with the reader picturing them.

@whalekeeper

Those are awesome! Especially the Eric one!😂