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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Oh ok that makes since. I didn’t know if it was a second book or like a parallel plot-line book.
Yw!
Oh yeah, I’ve adopted them now. 🥰🤣
Or at least Reuben.
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Loopy replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Dante
As Dante and Sebastian walked towards the kitchen, they were distracted by two girls digging through a closet. Small vials of various liquids were scattered on the floor around them.
“Ha!” One girl held up a bottle filled with a shimmery clear substance. “This’ll be fun, listening to what Rivet has to say while un…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Yesss partners in crime >:)
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Enid replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
I see you want to meet up with Sebastian and Dante?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Ok so, LOVE IT!!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
He had to be on patrol with Riker, the officer that was the same rank as Erich yet was too soft to even handle interrogations?
We all know sweet Riker, and to me this felt like the kind of introduction he might get to people who already are vaguely familiar with him. idk if you…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Shiloh
Stumbling after the band of girls, Shiloh regained her breath, and pulled the hair out of her face, smiling awkwardly. “Who was that dude? Needs a good dose of mysterious-shadowy-figure-equals-suspicious-behavior potion, if you ask me.”
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Enid replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Shiloh
Shiloh strode along, sword swaying slightly at her hip, feeling quite confident.
She could take on the world.
“Oof!”
She collided straight into someone’s back, making the mysterious person – a man in a silver coat – stumble forwards. Falling over into a pile of books, she looked up, strands of raspberry hair tangled in her eyes. “Hey,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@sarafini @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper
“Oh!” I turn backwards, caught between the awkwardness of Derek Len’s blocking our path, esther, and the new girl.
“Hey, I’m Elizabeth. What’s your name?”
“Oh! I’m Lesli…” I smile nervously, one eye still trained on Derek.
(Also Lesli is 19 if any of you guys didn’t know) (I know this is…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper
I follow behind Esther as she takes us down some stairs, eager for more exploration. She stops, astonished by a man standing in front of us. I make a face. He looks gross for some reason I cannot explain.
“Derek Len?” Esther says, awestruck.
I raise an eyebrow at her. They know eachother?
“Hate to br…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Sebastian
Seb acted as if he hadn’t heard – but a smile tugged at the corners of his mouth. He adjusted his cufflinks, calmly.
“Most likely where they came from,” he said, nodding at the approaching snack-bearers.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper
Lesli
“Explore this library, of course!”
I rub my hands together excitedly, ready to take off into a grand adventure. I would rather be doing this with–
–oh nevermind. I’ve got plenty of new people to meet here.
Cut off by a piercing scream, I look to my left.
“What was that?”
Are they ok?…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 Sorry I’ve forgotten who else!
Ey! Friday squad, we ready for this?!
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 7 months ago
If you were stranded on an island, what ONE person would you want to be stranded with?
Dante: I think… Ellie. She’s less likely to try to murder me… and she’s kinda smart. I guess.
Ellie: Eddie. Sorry, Dante.
Eddie: Ellie. Who else would I go with?
Dante: Hehe, that’s fair. *cries inside*
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 7 months ago
I love him he can have it
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 7 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 7 months ago
Ever since reading Luca’s whole “Mushroom Man” thing, I can’t get the muffin man quote from Shrek out of my head, except “muffin” is switched with “mushroom”.
“Do you know… the Mushroom Man?”
“The Mushroom Man?”
“THE MUSHROOM MAN!”
XD XD XD (Help I think my brain is broken)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Beta-readers?? in the forum Publishing & Platform 3 years, 7 months ago
If I have the time when you post it I’d love to beta read for you! (No promises but If it works out I’d be happy to!)
And hey we wright the same genre if that helps!
I love giving advice and would love to help you iron it out 🙂
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Fan Fic Middle Earth Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 7 months ago
No worries!
Wow, you remember a lot of details. *round of applause
almost put applesauce on accident* I think I need to reread the Hobbit now. XDAaaand I’m not ignoring your third installment, I just gotta do school first before reading it. =)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
So excited!!
Yosí
In the moment it took for Yosí to understand what was happening he had already found his cudgel and a place of defense beside the window. Instinct had moved his feet before he knew what he did.
Now all he could do was wait and watch unblinking. His eyes flicked from the latch to the window. C…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
You do? O.O *feels warm and fuzzy* Unfortunately, no, I didn’t make it up. It’s actually Old English.
I like your greeting phrase too!
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