Ava Blue

@esther-c

Ohhh, that makes more sense. Thanks for the clarification! I don’t remember what others have said right now but I know that slower/less action-y scenes can still be very important to show characters in, you just gotta balance how many of them you do with how many action-y ones you do, you know?

For example, although I haven’t written…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

now I understand your tag, mwahahaha

OOOO I really, really like this! Your writing style is fun to read and I like Rina and Quelin’s relationship, XD That’s probably my favorite part.

I’m so glad I found this topic! I love to laugh and most of my stories have a bit (a lot) of comedy in them.  I really want to post some stuff here but I would have to find the memes that are buried under my vast collection of random clutter lol.

XD That is the fifth time someone has recommended the Wingfeather saga to me. Now I really have to read it.  Dragons are awesome and The Bible is superior to all other books.  The oreo question is funny because a lot of people eat them very differently.  A lot of my friends eat the icing first and some don’t. For me it just depends on the da…[Read more]

Actually I made this topic because when I first joined, the art sharing forum was not letting me send pictures lol, So this one is kind of unnecessary.  I forgot about it until now. is it possible to change the name of the topic?

@godlyfantasy12

November doing origami?! That’s so cuteeee 🤩🥰😭😭 I do origami so it make me happy he does too 🥰

Thank you!  She is a viking character that I made. Her name is Melody

@kyronthearcanin

Oh, those are nice!

@freedomwriter76

AHHH they’re so adorable! The tiny brothers *melts*

Also the fact that Dietrich origami. XD or at least that’s what I’m assuming he’s doing

*round of applause*

@freedomwriter76

You are welcome!! ❤️❤️

Oh, I see. That makes sense. XD

That’s great! So glad you’re doing well! 💗💗💗115 pages? 🤩🤩🤩

I love that metaphor about carrying the mat, sounds like a great message! AWW! That sounds adorable!

I’m ok, lots of driving practice this week so I can meet the requirement of 50 practice hours and get my…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

LOVE IT!! I NEED MORE TINY LEO!!

So sweet! You did it so well! Not exactly a critique but when the sister questions about what he’s doing with the decorations, it wasn’t obvious to me she meant ill will, so it seems a little like Leo over reacted and started it XD

I can tell from reading the rest she’s not very nice…[Read more]

Hi Ava! Welcome to KP!

My name is Meeghan, and I am homeschooled.  I write stories, poems, and sometimes silly songs.  I draw a lot more than I write though lol. I write mostly fantasy, and as you could probably tell from my name, I love dragons.

I love Rina! She is really cool!  Here are a few questions:

1. What are 3 of you favorite bo…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

I might join over the summer! I’ll have more time to write higher quality than, and because the writing is public, I wanna make sure it’s my best 🙂

@kryonthearcanin

2. Favorite theme? Trying to figure out this question. I don’t know if you meant genre or something else, sorry.

Lol yeah that one confuses some people. Theme= message. So or some books it might be like friendship take sacrifice, it could be family is more important than money, learning to give up pride ect….

3. Rina was a p…

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@kyronthearcanin

=) You’re welcome!

1. Cool! My fantasy has three species for sure but I considered adding a fourth…but I dunno. XD I love that she learns to trust God, that’s a great theme!

2. XD I guess we’re even, I can’t draw cartoon animals very well. I can do realism of them if I have a photo to copy but other than that they’re not very…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom
Thanks for the tag!

@kyronthearcanin

Hi, nice to meet you! =)

I really like your art style! The detail is cool.
I’m also homeschooled and a writer because that clearly isn’t obvious XD
Oh and I guess I’m supposed to tell you about myself as well

Uh I’m also an artist, I write fantasy (my current WIP is a fantasy/mystery but my…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Hello and welcome!

Your character looks cool! Great art! 🙂

I’m mineralizedwritings around here! I wright dystopian fiction, make comics, and draw… among other hobbies. As to your question, mostly dystopian but I wouldn’t deny it has some fantasy like elements. My worldbuilding consists of a lot of ruins, and I like to make…[Read more]

@esther-c

What do you mean by a ‘boring’ scene? Like one you didn’t enjoy writing, or where the characters are bored, or are you talking about a less action focused slower scene?

@esther-c

Great question! I agree with Arcane that it will be different for every one.

I personally would say it is true for me. The parts I find boring to write are boring to read, and I simply do not write them. I keep a mental checklist on my head of things I have not included that must be added soon (Say a charater backstory that has to be…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Oh, cool!