Ava Blue

@freedomwriter76

AWW okay so I really like both snippets

…Peter needs to have someone with him 24/7. Just…yeah. *facepalm because no one was watching him and he’s only six*

Great job! =D

@joy-calle

Oh no. XD *memories of hearing siri tell me a story*

No, I haven’t done that yet. XD But I might have to now…if only for laughter.

@godlyfantasy12

OOOO I like it! =D

I have one question though, who is the blond guy in the top left corner? WAIT WAIT WAIT is that Arthur???

@keilah-h Oooo I really like the way you did the camo!

@power I reeeeaally like his armor, and the shading as others have mentioned.

@awsumfaith OOOOO I like how clean your lines are! Arwen looks nice. ALSO THE PATTERN ONE IS AMAZING, HOW DID YOU NOT SMUDGE THAT.

@loopylin

XD what happens if you’re both authors at the same time??? XD

@freedomwriter76

No worries! =D Great job!

…does he…get a decent ending?

@esther-c

Sorry I missed this! also my thoughts may be kinda jumbled I’m sick and brain is kinda fuzzy

I like the pacing! =D

I agree with Min, you do a lot of telling and don’t show things very much. It’s not bad to tell, there is a place for it. I’m not gonna elaborate more on that since my brain isn’t working and Min already gave you an…[Read more]

@power Like Whalekeeper said, beautiful shading! And I love the scar and his green eyes

@keilah-h Cool! I love all the trinkets surrounding him

I found one recently I would like to add 

@awsumfaith Lol, those are hilarious

@esther-c

I like this scene a lot! The action was really good!

I felt the pacing was pretty good, although it would have been nice to have some more descriptions and less statements about what they did.

The soldiers were coming ever closer. Ev ran out of the cave with Ami close on his heels. His eyes frantically searched the forest for a place…

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@kyronthearcanin

Sorry for the late response! I don’t have any critique for you today, but great job! =D

@orielle21

Cool! sorry for the late response, I tried to respond to you yesterday but internet didn’t want to work

@freedomwriter76

AH THAT SCENE WITH JOSHUA

XD girl I almost cried again

*round of applause* *glares daggers at Frieda* *kidnaps Joshua and gives his guitar to my sister cause she knows how to fix them*

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

OOOO I like both of your mood boards! =D

@awsumfaith

XD those are hilarious

Also I like your username.

@godlyfantasy12

It’s ok! Just wanted to let ya know : D

@power BEAUTIFUL shading!!!

@godlyfantasy12

Uh feel a lil awkward about saying this but I know other people aren’t always aware of what triggers other people… the pics of the girl that are in black and white look really creepy to me 😅 I know they don’t for everyone but I think it might perhaps deserve a trigger warning XD Images just really stick with me because that’s…[Read more]