Ava Blue

@Kyrontheacanin

Thanks! Dystopian is my personal favorite.

Oh! I love how you have so many different species in your book! I like the bear ones lol!! Sorry it took me so long to respond, life has been busy lol.

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah I get it

You do whatevs you want

Btw what color dress do you think Ara will wear? Personally I think she’d look good in rose gold

@godlyfantasy12

You on at this ungodly hour? Lol

@godlyfantasy12

Thorn

The boy seemed embarrassed, and Thorn didn’t want to push him out of his comfort zone.

“I can’t wait for Phys Ed,” she sighed, grabbing Calvin’s arm and starting to skip. “I want to go outside. Have fun. Don’t you?”

Calvin pulled on her arm, to keep her from running ahead, like a dog on a leash. “Unfortunately for you,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I believe both November and Paxton’s next classes (along with everyone else) are English.

Also here’s Marcel. He’s in the classroom Paxton’s in, I think.

Marcel

School… yaaaaay…

Marcel mimicked jazz hands, and slumped in his chair. Like a potato.

A soulless potato.

Why did he have to go to school? Angels didn’t need an…[Read more]

@livingwoodchronicles

That whole thing sounds epic! You have a lot already. It’s kind of like a mix between Dune and Mistborn. And I love Seren! And all the alien critters!

(Have you read Dune?)

I appreciate everyone else’s confidence in my advice giving capabilities, but really I don’t have much. My sci-fi story is a lot more light hearted and…[Read more]

I guess I’m more like November than I thought XD

@godlyfantasy12

I’ll be gone until after lunch. Cooking class 😛 WAit for me!

@livingwoodchronicles

Hi! I can’t remember if we’ve ever talked. If we haven’t, nice to meet you!

What’s your idea for your sci-fi story? Even if I don’t have any good advice, I’d love to hear it.

@godlyfantasy12

YUUUUSSSSS

You just completely put into words what I wanted but didn’t know I wanted XDXDXD

Now I don’t want the disability to be the main inner conflict, but instead a side issue to the main conflict – but that’s exactly what I meant by underdog trope. A-A-AAAAAAND the whole idea of her aligning everyone else by pushing past a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 My children want socializaaaaation XD

Calvin

Algebra drew to a slow close, giving rise to half-closed eyelids and yawns behind piles of school supplies.

November left at one point for the bathroom, and Calvin couldn’t blame him. The boy seemed to be a bundle of scolionophobic nerves.

The teacher finally nodded assent, and the…[Read more]

@kyronethearcanin

Somehow I managed not to see this until now… I’ve done that twice in the past two days! 🤦‍♀️

XD

Doing well!

Glad to hear it!

What’s you WIP about? I feel like maybe I’ve heard of it (you might even have told me lol I have a terrible memory lol) but I’m drawing a blank…

Oh great question! I have multiple projects, but my main is…[Read more]

I NEED HELP

WITH CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT

So in Project Chrysanthemum, the theme is all about isolation vs. fellowship, and how we will never feel purely connected to others in this life – both because of sin, but also because as Christians we have another chasm between us and others. We are not of the world. On top of that is the theme of…[Read more]

Also, sorry that was later than I said it would be.

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76

um I’m not sure if this was in his previous description, but Maddox wears very nice looking clothes, including a white button down shirt, a black vest, and a tie. He also has a short baton on his belt, and a shoulder holster with a loaded revolver in it. (Just a normal re…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I agree, it’s great to study someone else’s style and implement it using your own character’s poses and traits. It helps you to really grasp the style itself.

Aw shoot the pic didn’t show up

@godlyfantasy12

Well I’m not entirely qualified but I’ve definitely gotten better at drawing since I drew Nyx for u… so… I’ll try giving advice? XD Animals aren’t really my thing, but I’m gonna guess they’re the same as humans in that… it takes practice (aaauuurgh). I’d say that’s number 1 advice, because if you’ve only just picked this up…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I never read twilight (not much of a romance person) but it did sell really well and the books were well received when they were released. It is true though that the success of the twilight book series led to an increase of publisher publishing vampire/supernatural romances because that after twilight released those types books sold…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Lol I see! That’s pretty cool! I recently did a character sheet a bit like that (I think it was five mc’s on a page) But kp won’t let me post it boo hoo.

I must warn you, I LOVE talking about art, and I sometimes go overboard when asked for advice. So yeah, take what you want from this ramble lol. I think it’s great you’re…[Read more]