Ava Blue

@godlyfantasy12

Ofc!!

Probably just a structural kind of editing, to see how it flows and if anything feels off. 😊

@calyhuge

Well we’re supposed to stick close to the school… Otherwise it isn’t a school RP anymore.

Maybe you could visit a park?

Oh, and if you wanted, since you’ve got more of a medieval story, you could start a medieval roleplay. A lot of other writers on here have high fantasy characters. That would be cool.

@karissa-chmil

Aw, thank you for the compliment! I read your chapter and the girl felt so alive in my mind. 😊

@calyhuge

Don’t set it on fire or anything too huge tho 😂 Idk if anyone would be able to keep up.

I want to explore the city a little because I essentially write suburban fantasy – I think other people do too – and this place has just so many opportunities!

Oh my goodness, honestly I would love to get into editing as a profession and I’m seriously thinking about it! What books do you use?

And this is a great topic, because I’ve been wanting some pointers ever since… well, a couple months ago. There’s always room for improvement.

So Godly, feel free to tear my heart out and feed it to an…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Marcel

Marcel gave Riker a half-smile, and leaned to one side so Pax might see him.

Pax didn’t notice. He was staring wide-eyed at a bright screen, with a look of complete contentment, and held Leo’s hand.

Marcel brushed a strand of pink fluff out of his eyes. If you guys want… um… I’ll be at the old soda foun…[Read more]

Ah yes, the comically romantic fight scene 😂 And the prejudice and angst for Keida, naturally. She looks different, or has different powers?

Seb’s the opposite in a way. He never has any trouble looking like he belongs in his father’s dimension, even though he was born in another (and he always thought his mother had left them or something). But…[Read more]

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CUPCAKES IN THE CHAT FOR FREEDOM!!!

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(Ok that’s my little…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Last chapter?!! 🥹😍😲😲

And you are so welcome! I’m honored to be able to support you! <3

I’m so happy for you! Is it kinda emotional for you lol?

And hey I mean if you ever plan on having illustrations… 🤔😏😏

I do I do XD

@thearcaneaxiom

Actually that helps me think through my problem better – I have templates available for when I need them, internal conflict and all, I’m just blocked when it comes to the what if questions. As in, I don’t know what to explore. But it could be that I need to take a break and come back to it later with a fresh mind. Thank you 😋

@freedomwriter76

Congrats!!! That’s awesome – you’ll have to celebrate with a huge ice cream sundae or something!! That’s a huge achievement and you should be proud of yourself 😘😘❤️

@thearcaneaxiom

*Telepathy link* Exactly!! There are a million ideas that can’t come from a particular set, and where are you supposed to find templates for them? That’s why you make your own, once you know your concept well enough.

When you really think about it, the what if questions look for things completely outside of anything already cre…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 AHHHH girl that’s amazing! *twirl hugs* I’m so excited for you and praying for your as God leads you forward in your writing journey! <33

@freedomwriter76

Sorry you were feeling sad! That’s great you got to see your sis and have fun with her though!

DUDE THAT’S SO COOL!

When can I buy it? Where can I buy it?!🤯🤯

XDXD Ok ok I’m kidding I know that takes awhile 😂😂 are you going to just keep it for you and your friends or get published?

Seriously though we are all so proud of…[Read more]

I’ve stalked this ever since it started, and finally have some thoughts 😂

For me, I start off free-thinking (or working off a mechanic, as you put it), because like you said, it almost always yields more original ideas. In fact, I get ideas when I’m not even actively thinking – and those… I’m assuming my brain just subconsciously asked what…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Ofc! And thank you!

Aww, she sounds precious 😍😘❤ Oh my goodness, I love babies (our family and church have had so many but I NEVER get to hold them enough 😂)

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks for reminding me of the mechanics topic, I was going to comment but never got around to it…

Yeah – actually, that has definitely been on my mind lately, because I often find myself switching to a better main character who was originally meant to be only supporting. It’s a strange process, but it works for me, because…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

I’m sorry to hear the past few days have been hard! <3<3

Oh what’s the new project!?

I’m doing alright! Like not great, but idk, I’m dealing with it ok. I feel like God is showing me so much during the hard times, and I’m super thankful for that.

Writing is going pretty well! I’ve restarted my draft of book one, I’ve…[Read more]