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Enid replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Heeeyy I agree with you, our stories are so hard to explain XD
I found your allegories very easy to follow… I don’t know if that was your intention, but that’s how it read XD If I showed your prologue to a non-Christian friend, they would recognize it as the Creation and Fall story. I have no idea how they would react,…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@tharcaneaxiom
About the Golden Compass – the movie is not good at all in adapting the book. It tried to follow the plot too tightly, without capturing the essence of the story. But I digress.
The book takes an anti-Christian position, but its points are actually extremely valid when it comes to looking back at what the “church” has been, how…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Aww, poor seb! I feel bad for him now! I’m going to wait for freedom to get back because she hasn’t rped in awhile
My mom is gluten free also. I’m allergic to like everything (ok not actually, but a lot) thankfully I grew out of my egg allergy at 5!
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Loopy replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yeah they’re pretty unpredictable, and in that, they’re predictable 🤯 At least, that’s how I write them (…Seb, since I don’t have any other official ENTP character yet). Trying to surprising, and always one-upping people.
Yeah exactly
I decided to stop thinking about it.
lol yeah probably a good choice
How accurate did you find your…
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Enid replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Thank you ❤
Gotcha, makes sense. Are you the only gluten-free person in your family?
Sebastian
As Clement sped off, Seb brushed his bangs out of his face, and rolled his eyes.
It was true. He literally could not afford it.
Sure, being arrogant was fun. But it was also necessary.
The man had taken the reply the wrong w…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
😂 So you are well acquainted with the type.
Yeah they’re pretty unpredictable, and in that, they’re predictable 🤯 At least, that’s how I write them (…Seb, since I don’t have any other official ENTP character yet). Trying to surprising, and always one-upping people.
That makes sense then! Before I took a test for him, I could never…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Seb sighs. “I do seem so, don’t I? It’s less that I think highly of myself, and more that I can’t afford to be anything lower.”
Clement scoffs at the lofty remark; but refuses to reply; instead speeding up to walk next to the brothers. They seemed a good bit more sensible, even if quiet.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@everyone Um just a note about Mr. Gregory: he may be a grumpy jerk and a huge rule lover and have high expectations for everyone, but he is a good guy. He cares about justice and has respect for people who earn it. If he finds out about what all the bullies have been doing, trust me, they will not last long at this school.
I’m g…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Also entps are known as the “most introverted of the extroverts” so there’s that.
Sorry you got me onto the subject of personality types which is something I’m really interested in so I talk about it a lot
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Loopy replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yeah Dante is super easy and natural to write. I’m an INTP so I’m pretty much writing what I would do if I had way more self confidence (and, in the case of Dante, a broken moral compass). It might also be easy because my brother’s an ENTP. Idk. Or maybe they are easy to write because they’re so unpredictable?
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Marcel
Marcel swung open the cafeteria door, snacks stuffed in his pockets, and was just about to settle down next to the two kids when two more entered.
They looked older and a touch more experienced, but nevertheless, one of them, the boy, had an eager gleam in his eye.
They screeched to a halt, and the boy waved…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
YuUus please do
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Goooootcha. Those could be very useful, since most of the teachers don’t support the students in fights. And that way, there’s some context characters in the school, if that makes sense.
#emotionaldeathisreal
Oh yeah, we’re at 200!!!!! *cOnFeTti*
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
*Muffled giggle* 😎 I’m so glad Hugo comes more naturally to me now, because before, he did NOT. But he fits in his world now. Literally the only person Seb would ever show public affection for.
You are now in on the joke, my friend XD
AH-HAH! No WONDER those two got along so well in the sleepover RP! The question is, why are they so…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
*Takes note*
Eavesdropper at window. Got it. I bet he could cause a lot of trouble if he wanted to 😋
…All 13?? I mean, Freedom has like 26-billion that we can never keep track of. But still. That’s a lot. What are they all gonna do? – I mean, since they’re faeries. Do they count as students?
Honestly most of my friends…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Mr. Gregory
Slayer of armies. Grand sword master. General of the king’s army for three generations. Guardian of the true heir. Alan Gregory had survived and accomplished many unbelievable things in his lifetime and was now one of the most powerful men Amberothe had ever seen.
Yet here he was. Stuck on babysitting duty once again.
Gregory wa…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
XD I loved that little scene. I’m starting to love Hugo more and more.
Hehe I understand the horseradish thing now. I was a bit confused by your signature earlier, lol.
Also, Seb’s an ENTP? It seems like all my favorite chaotic characters are. (Dante’s an ENTP)
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Hehe I like Chero. He’s like the personification of the saying “a little bird told me…”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yay! Company!
lol those text conversations were hilarious. Seb is a surprisingly relatable character sometimes XD
Felicity
“-and then she gave me this look, you know? Like sure, my clothes look like I’ve come straight off the dirty streets of Exile, which I had, but she didn’t have to make that face.”
Felicity chattered…[Read more]
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