Ava Blue

@euodia-vision

I love Thorin so much 🙂

*Comes back days later* XD

Heeeyyy thank you guys so much for the input 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

The only thing I could say about it is that I never have felt personally connected to Seb. He’s the only one I’ve read a lot of. He is super cute and quirky, but I never have related to him. That being said, I haven’t read any emotional scene…

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@euodia-vision

@smiley

Thank you <3

@freedomwriter76

Thank you so much girl <33

@freedomwriter76 @anyone else

I just needed somebody to tell, I’m having a rough time with my health rn and it’s really getting me down. I’ve been fantasizing about all the cool things I want to do with my life in the future, but I can hardly start on anything because of my health, and it’s really discouraging. I have to be at home generally…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh ok, that does help. I thought he was literally the one who did it.

I think I remember esther from a snippet!

@freedomwriter76

Oh ok 😂😅 I actually wasn’t sure there for a sec XD

Yeah!

@freedomwriter76

I think it’s a great idea! I like it when I get to see a complicated characters pov. I think what would be important to me is to make to clear why he killed Fin, how he felt about it at the time, and how he feels about it now.

I think it’s much harder to redeem a character who has killed another character, however it’s important…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Manyfelicitationsandjoyouswishes!

I’m so excited for you! That’s awesome! (And I echo another: you work at the rate of an “actual” author. XD)

*Flings confetti*

*Can’t remember your favorite cookie*

*Offers you a chocolate chip cookie*

*And ice cream*

*And a handful of raspberries* 😉

This is the first in a trilogy, right? 

@freedomwriter76

XD I didn’t mean to come off all ‘CuZ I’m An aDuLt Now’ 😂🤣 I’ve only had instagram for a year at this point, so ig I got it when I was nearing 17. My parents may have let me have it sooner, but I wouldn’t have wanted it then.

My sister, me, and about three of her writing friends from other countries follow each other, and it’s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That’s so great! 💗💗💗

You think when you’re older you’ll do social media? Ik you said you don’t do it now and I get it (I tend to forget people here are younger than me XD I definitely didn’t have it when I was your age) There’s a pretty solid christian writers community on instagram, it’s a great way to get the word out about…[Read more]

@esther-c

Lol! Yeah Kaine’s hair color is kinda weird, when I first started drawing him i didn’t have a good color so it turned out burgundy.

@freedomwriter76

WOOOO! We are so happy for you girl!! 💗💗💗 You are so welcome for all the support! I never knew how awesome online communities could be until I found kp, and you’ve really made my time here all the better. Are you planning any next steps rn or just taking some time to enjoy your achievement?

Also today is my first day of…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6

Jack 

Just as Tyler spoke, the closet door swung open into the hall again.

Jack stepped out, still talking to Cody over his shoulder. “You can’t just slam the door in someone’s face. Come on out ‘an introduce yerself.”

He turned to the two out in the hall and gave them both a respectful nod. “Sorry for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Seriously, though, your writing style is my favorite. I can’t wait to read something you publish.

@whalekeeper

This might just be me being a grammar perfectionist, and you haven’t done it in a while, but I have noticed a couple times you have written sentences like this:

“He stopped at the door, listened.”

I’ve seen actual published authors do this too, so it’s probably not a big deal, but when I see it, it distracts me from the story bec…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I love the scenes!!! 💗💗 I can really feel Tauren’s inner conflict in these two scenes, and I love that. Fabulous!!! 👏👏👏

Lol I’m sorry some how I never got back to you! Thank you so much!  <33

@whalekeeper

I really haven’t read enough of your writing to give a critique lol! All I know is your world is avatar-esk  (Did the phoenix child idea stem from the avatar?) and is very unique. I could say that all the ideas from your world don’t seem super tied together, but I haven’t read enough to say that. Your writing style is very unique…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude, I love your writing style so much though! I’m trying to find something in your role plays, but I might be better at critiquing a snippet (sorry you’re busy with school! If you can’t find one, that’s alright.). I’ll keep looking, though.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thanks! 😊

I wonder why I do it though?

Do you have any common tropes like that?