Ava Blue

@whalekeeper

I was pretty much thinking the same thing as smiley since we have a fair range of different genres. Like, a fair mix of different dances, like ballroom dancing, line dancing, freestyle, and maybe swing? I’m obsessed with swing music right now, lol. Just anything the characters would be accustomed to in their own worlds.

Yeah that s…[Read more]

Okay, completely unconnected, and I’ll disappear after this because I have never read KotLC, but…

If elves are vegetarian, why do they hunt deer in the Hobbit?

I mean, I am the person who has never seen the movies and despite not living under a rock still clings to a black haired, green eyed Legolas. I have also only read two stories from the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sounds like a plan! Pls tag me if you have any cute scenes of Ruebsy or Wolfie 🥰

I spent way too much time on Pinterest for this

@calyhuge

I was literally JUST going to revisit this topic 🤣 for certain reasons. I’ll post what I was going to say myself in a little bit, and respond to your points here.

1. Entirely agree.

2. Yep yep yep, and not just in the first book. Onward, as they say.

3. One of my biggest character critiques.

4. I wouldn’t necessarily call this a bad…[Read more]

@smiley

but I kind of thought like Harry Potter (never seen the movies or read the books but I’ve seen clips of the dance they have and it’s like a boarding school version of a prom and they dress pretty fancy

Exactly

ELECTRO SWING.

❤️

Will return with songs shortly.

@calyhuge

Lol, not answering for Smiley necessarily, but they don’t look like bullies to me… just imagining them randomly beating up a stranger 🤣🤣

@loopylin

Yeah, these roleplays are really useful, even if you participate in them for a short time!

Ok, that’s EXACTLY how I feel about your characters 🤣🤣 Maybe we have similar preferences? Not sure what it is, but it’s so easy to click with your charries. They’re just so easy to recognize and love.

I just try to make my charries unique &#x1f…[Read more]

@jonas

Oh.. are the dragons evil? Kaine won’t want to fight them unless he has confirmation XD

Sure

@princesachronicle22

No I’m just throwing things out there. Whatever you want to do.

And the voice(s) could even be @rae’s charrie if she joins?

Yeah that works : )

@rae

It’s fine! Do expect some cockyness from kaine though 😝

It might be a bit till I can get back to yall, looks like I have some catching up to do here… and on schoolwork ;(

@calyhuge

Lol good luck with that, Joy.

How do you pronounce eke? I wanna weird my family out by saying it in normal conversation.

@mineralizedwritings

It’s definitely been a while! A lot of things have conspired to keep me off KP. (Mainly College and Bible Quizzing) I’m still here though. How have you been?

Thank you, I await thy assessment in eagerness.

@whalekeeper @euodia-vision @calyhuge @freedomwriter76

Uh, not that this detail is really that important, but Lois’ eyes are gold-brown now, not green.

Felicity

“School dance,” Marcel said flatly.

Lois and Felicity exchanged a look.

“Um – Marcel? Can I talk to you for a minute?”

Babs and Marcel slipped away and Lois did the same, finding his…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I do that too! Or at least I try to. Or sometimes just snippets of a character arc. It makes it a lot more fun and keeps stuff moving. Putting Dante in the character castle and having him interact with Steve and all the other characters actually helped me a ton in developing his character arc for the actual book.

Also (eke), why are…[Read more]

@rae

You’re totally welcome to join our group if @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 are alright with it 😊

You just gotta be patient though since it’s a bit slow moving right now just so you know

@whalekeeper

Are you saying our groups should meet?

@elishavet-pidyon

woah, it feels like I haven’t seen you in ages! Your writing style is lovely, sadly it’s getting late and i’m to tired to leave a critique lol, keep up the good work!