Ava Blue

@loopylin

*runs up, out of breath* I’m baaack

Sebzter

“Come now!” Seb puffed quietly. “It isn’t that bad… is it?”

“If you call a huge bruise normal.”

The boy patted his own face a few times, trying to gauge how big it was, and what his definition of bad was. It felt like a candied apple had grown over his left eye.

“I hit myself with a hairb…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Concerned is an understatement.

I enjoyed this scene so much! I love that Riker helps him, if course, and that Leon accepts that help. I also really liked how specific yet clean the trigger and flashback were – it made sense, and conveyed the horror of the memory without giving me trauma.

There were two places where I would…[Read more]

I kinda just want to make a whole new website for all us to chat and share pictures. No idea how, but I could learn… somehow

@whalekeeper

The Twinss

“That was close.” Eddie’s whisper tickled Ellie’s ear. Ellie leaned away and scowled.

“You’re close.”

The two girls were hiding in yet another closet. This one was smaller this time, more like a locker or cubby for storing school supplies.

Ed’s tail brushed the disgruntled Ellie in the face as she tried shuffling aro…[Read more]

@keilah-h

yep. He was forced to listen to it on repeat for 48 hours as punishment for a crime, and has never been the same.

Poor guy. That sounds miserable. 😬😂

@whalekeeper

Great sorrow hath come upon the people of Kingdom Pen. I have memes too.

:(((

@youpeoples

Mr. Gregory 

“I swear, this school will be the death of me.” Gregory pinched the bridge of his nose in frustration. “Not war, not old age, but children.”

He looked up at the four armed janitor. Liko seemed nervous in Gregory’s presence despite being almost a foot taller than him. He kept fidgeting and shuffling his feet.

“Do…[Read more]

@rae @keilah-h @whoever

Winston

The demon boy took some time to absorb the sight. The sun warmed up his scales, and he periodically closed his eyes to soak it in. When he could enjoy it no more, he walked west, towards where the evening would be the brightest.

Every time he came to a hilltop, he ran his hands over the sheep, as if running…[Read more]

Y’all, I’m also sad that the pictures aren’t working, because I have memes and comics and fanart, but none of it will come through. My passion is temporarily deflated.

@freed_and_redeemed

Oof idk, I feel as if I don’t know enough about your story to give ideas 😅 Maybe give him scenes where he’s missing meaningful moments with his family because he’s looking back instead of forward (you know, reliving his grief)? He could miss a child’s special event, or forget a promise he made one of them.

@loopylin

Dante deserves his own personal planet of cuteness

Sebzter

“Yes.” The boy stopped smiling.

“You obviously enjoy it, but -“

“Yeah, it’s warm and fuzzy, but it hurts. I can’t help myself, and my friends begin to wonder.” Seb blinked and tipped his hat over his eyes. “Am I a pyro for the sake of it? It is entertaining. But…[Read more]

@keilah-h

there’s a character in one of my stories that’s terrified of the baby shark song

🤣

@whalekeeper

Dante

“Only pyro in existence? Of course you’re not. If you were, it’d just be called Seb syndrome.”

“You know what I mean.”

“Yeah. I know what you mean.” Dante finished off his scone, then leaned back and stared at the ceiling.

“Ever wish you weren’t?”

@loopylin

Sebzter

Inside the classroom, moments before being snatched, Seb’s inner dream shrieked for dominance. He turned around, and for a split second, he could see a complex diagram of his and the crowd’s movements, like shimmery white ghosts. With a tug of the plot strings, he yanked himself forward, and warped through the crowd. The doo…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dante

“Alright. You’re the bait.” His reflective eye flashed for a moment in the dark, then he was gone.

The mob rushed past. As Dante hoped, they were more concerned with catching Sebastian, who was the original offender.

Seb raced ahead, then ran suddenly into an empty classroom. The people at the front of the crowd fol…[Read more]

@loopylin

Splendid *offers Dante a butterscotch scone in thanks*

Sebzter

“After a precursory kick of inappropriate nature, I made a face.” Seb yanked at his lower eyelids, and his squishy smile widened in the overwhelming white light emitting from his eyes. The rhythm was strong, and he held it back in order to talk sensibly. “Now they want…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Apparently Dante is immune to my current writing block

Dante 

Running was one of Dante’s best skills. He kept pace easily with Sebastian as excited children crashed through the kitchen after them. His jacket flew behind him. Pastries tumbled out of the pockets. He turned to look behind, running almost sideways now, and la…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Waves* 😝 Heya. You probably already know how you want the characters to end up, but I’d also recommend plotting out what to do in the middle, or at least have bullet points for each chapter.

Having some kind of outline helps the pacing a lot, which I can see you’re worried about rushing or slowing. Leon’s alcoholism and R…[Read more]

@whalekeeper 😊

That’s actually what my hair looked like before I grew it out