Ava Blue

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh, I’m excited to listen to it! I don’t think I know any of those songs.

@ellette-giselle

I’ve never done that, but I’ve prayed for book characters many times.

@whalekeeper

Girl, seriously. What could possibly have to take blame for 🤣 You are at fault for nothing!! You don’t have to share your writing, me or somebody else asks or doesn’t. <3

Yw

Yeah… same. Story of my life rn. Y’know that song by one republic “I lived”? every time I miss a opportunity to have a experience, I remember the lyrics.…[Read more]

@esther-c @theducktator

Thanks for the opinions!

@mineralizedwritings

XD they probably haven’t asked because you’re a little more private with your writing. I figured I’d just let you know I’m interested <3

XD Yeah, it’s 100% my fault for not making any effort. Thank you for the support though, maybe I’ll post something because of that :]
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@mineralizedwritings

😂

@savannah_grace2009

Ohh okay okay okay…

Just take a second to relax, cuddle up in the blankets or something (I’m messaging in bed XD), and remember you are not the problem. You are not the problem for being indecisive. Of course you are going to second-guess this – I know I would – because it’s hard to picture which future is better for you in…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Wow I don’t think anyone’s asked me that XD I appreciate it. I don’t share a lot of my stuff as you know, but sure, I’ll keep you in mind! ❤️

XD they probably haven’t asked because you’re a little more private with your writing. I figured I’d just let you know I’m interested <3

@whaley @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @loopylin @anyone…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m so honored you consider me experienced lol

@savannah_grace2009

Heeeyy thank you! And yes, visuals are sooo helpful!! I really recommend color coding. It can be overwhelming at times, but it feels like a huge step up from containing everything in your head.

Is it just me, or do we need more tips for creating actual hands-on plot?

Like, I like learning about plot points, but brainstorming the actual meat of those points – “the zombies attack here and trigger the electric grid in xyz cities” – is hard. And no one really talks about it.

Why should I include a zombie attack at this moment? Are these…[Read more]

@calyhuge

You mean you’re not going to publish it? 🥺🥺🥺

I didn’t say that. But I’m not going to say I will either, because I’m an undedicated uncontrollable teenager.

@theducktator

Sticky noooooootes. Those are perfect for this. I need to gimme some XD

@linus-smallprint

Oh yeah, I’m familiar with Fallacy Detective.

I think the most similar a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’d probably not be convinced that they were actually dying until the last minute.

@esther-c

Ooh, yes.

Poor Cassian though.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so confused now.😂

Naturally Eloy is angry at his brother for everything he did, so he builds up anger, and then instead of stepping in front of Cass to die in his place, he HESITATES. So the opportunity is lost and Cass dies, when Eloy could have saved him.

So now Eloy has to live with the guilt that he should have and…

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@savannah_grace2009

You’re doing great Sara 🥰 You are brave to try counseling even though it sounds potentially scary and sensitive.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m glad you’re feeling better btw! ❤️ And I promise I am not thinking badly of your writing behind your back. I sometimes feel that way about my own writing, and I have self-esteem/anxiety issues myself about being secretly hated. I think you are a very capable writer on KP and definitely braver than me for sharing this…[Read more]

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Oh wow, a lot happened, and I’m overwhelmed just reading this conversation 😅 I can’t address everything y’all and Sara said, but I have a few small thoughts.

About the Pythonos’ redeemability:

I didn’t mean to imply that they can’t be saved! I just meant that they wouldn’t have any draw to be saved, so they can never be sa…

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Ugh I posted something long and it didn’t work XD

Min has way more experience with dystopia, so listen to her. But I’m working on a dreampunk/fantasy dystopia, so I have a feeling for the genre.

Dystopias are all about taking a philosophy or point of worry in the modern day, and running with it as far as you can in a hypothetical scenario. It’s…[Read more]