Ava Blue

@linus-smallprint Please correct me if I’m wrong about guys

The illustrations are great! I love the sibling drawing.

I don’t know what that would be! If they were girls it would be easy! I just don’t know how guys “connect” and whenever I try to write it my brothers look like they’re going to throw up. They say I make them too girly in their getting to know each other, so I just kinda steer clear. An…

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Oh wow I missed y’all’s messages XD

@ellette-giselle

I would still love feedback on the other stuff as we went, but I’m a little at a loss with Aaron at the moment.

Thank y’all so, so much. I hope y’all can tell that this really is helpful…… I can see there’s a problem now…… I just have to fix it………

I understand what it feels like to get mixed feedback about a character, it’s so fr…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh my goodness, it’s KERMIT. I LOVE IT.

@rae

So true.

@whalekeeper

It is as if the USA President adopted a baby dragon and pretended it was a dog in front of the FBI.

I love this. So much.

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Thank you! <3

Ok Im not letting this rp die. Time for some cringy romance.

@whalekeeper

Lois

“Yes! Twelve to zero! Hey, why aren’t you throwing your pine cones? You’re making this too easy for me.”

Lois stared down at his shoes, which were dangling several stories above the sidewalk.   After a pause, he chucked the pine cone in his hand as far as he coul…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!

No prob! And no bad thoughts from you about yourself!! I only convey thoughts well through journaling/writing :] Trust me, if you knew me irl, I am quite slow with my t…[Read more]

Sorry Sara, I tagged you in the above message instead of Ellette. So if you get an extra notif, that’s why. 😅

@savannah_grace2009

oh nooooo!! Say it isn’t so!!

I’m sorry 😭😕

I love Aaron so much!! He is my secret big brother, and now he’s under attack!! Ok, I will try to take into consideration what you two have been saying. It’s going to be hard, especially since he’s perfect in my mind, so it’ll be tough to figure out how to improve him.

It might be…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I’m homeschooled. I do a co-op called Classical Conversations. What about you?

Aight I’ll resurrect it with some ranting

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @godlyfantasy12 (Asked for tags but she’s gone 😥)

I’ve never gone crazy over my own characters because it’s not my personality I guess. But I just want to say, I have a semi-new character relationship which is actually my favorite right now.

In one…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It is!! I will probably post some more ideas soon.

I also don’t think everyone needs my advice/ideas because each person thinks in their own way. But I don’t know who will randomly see this topic and be helped by it. So again, anyone can give tips here because it might be of use in the future.

@loopylin

I like the Twins’ cute scrunchy noses

Hey Ellette! I read through all the scenes so far, and although I’m not going to do a scene-by-scene critique, I can give you overall thoughts. Please read this with a grain of salt! 😅

I like the Crusades-ish concept, where different people are invading Ardenta partially to spread their own belief system. It makes Aaron look like a go-between and…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks!

We don’t have a lot of tech at my house. I don’t have a phone or computer, even though I’m 15. So, mostly habit. I also like being able to carry writing with me wherever, and lack of distraction is nice too. I will edit on one of the family computers though.

This is a WIP that I haven’t really talked about on here, namely…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I’m handwriting, so I haven’t counted words much, lol.