Ava Blue

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Barnes

Barnes knelt so she was on level with Rory’s hands, and began to gently wrap them with the cloth. “I stand to gain your health and safety.”

@koshka

*Concedes and pulls you back up onto your feet*

@ellette-giselle

*barnes seems to have a thing for ripping clothing. lol*

Huh, I guess you’re right.

Barnes

The look in his eyes twinged in Barnes’ heart, but she kept her voice low and stable.

“Look.” She held up her hands to his. Both of them had deep scrapes from the concrete. Rory’s were a lot worse, since he had fallen farther. “These ca…[Read more]

@koshka

*Steps backwards off porch*

*Snorts*

Every time my class comes across a grammar mistake, we tend to cackle over it for five minutes straight.

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Barnes

Two figures stumbled around the church. Leo and Rory. They were ready to leave, although the younger looked entirely exhausted.

Barnes got up, and gave the two boys a quick look before she faced away. “…Just a moment.”

She ripped off her other sleeve. Pushing her mask up her face, she tore at the sleeve with…[Read more]

@koshka

Yayy! *Barnes is knocked off balance by the ball and falls to the ground*

@ellette-giselle

YIPPY!

(though Rory won’t think so lol)

Hehe I thought not

oh no! what happened?

I’ve depended too much on arm strength and I have whiplash from trying to grab my opponents. I also have really bad circulation so that isn’t any help. :’)

It might take me a bit to reply because my hands are trembling really bad tonight, but Barnes would really appreciate it. XD

@ellette-giselle @koshka

I’m here, you can connect with Barnes and get moving together.

@liberty

I will have 24 snowballs soon, and then people will suffer!😈

@hybridlore

Lol, it does sound like that. It’s a Christmas song.

Yay, Wyoh didn’t eat those words! You have no idea how glad I am. *sweats*

@linus-smallprint

I have… a lot of feedback. *coughs*

Thank you Linus for giving me access to this story! I have a lot of thoughts and I hope they can be of some use to you! Obviously these are my opinions, so use them as you will. 🙂

Characters:

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Love Tyn. H…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I had a school book once with that analogy. A couple more: The boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way a bowling ball wouldn’t. She walked into a room like a centipede with 98 missing legs.

Oh, dear, I still have 600 words to write.

@whalekeeper

I just realized I can’t actually flip my hair because I have a bob cut. 😐

Sad. *flips hair* XD

@smiley

*screeches* I typed out a whole reply and it got eaten! I’ll type it out again sooo.

@linus-smallprint

Thank you! Yes, Zuko was my favourite, along with his Uncle Iroh. I love redemption arcs, and Zuko’s was very well done.

Yayy!! We should totally make (or revitalize) a topic for that show. This forum needs to experience some great fanart for AtLA, and you are definitely the best artist for the job.

@ellette-giselle

I’m aware that it is real, and I would never go to a seance or something, but this particular magic is made up, and it isn’t like occult magic. I do think that fantasy magic in general is harmless, (though most of the fantasy I read is Christian and/or middle grade so it doesn’t get that dark), though maybe not this one since it…[Read more]

I might write a fuller explanation about what I believe about this matter (taking into account what Ellette said about putting images into the reader’s mind), but the gist of it is that someone is always going to be bothered by this.

Linus has made a very harmless representation of magic. This is just imagery of humans developing animalistic t…[Read more]