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Loopy replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 1 day ago
Hi everyone, sorry I ghost this topic so much, but my dad could really use some prayer right now.
We just called an ambulance to take him to the hospital and my mom went with him. He’s been having really bad stomach pain that keeps him from eating and sleeping and makes it difficult to breathe. He hasn’t been able to work because of it and it’…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
@rae you were asking about my currently unnamed fanfic
for a fandom I don’t even suggest getting into?? lolnot finished editing it but here, delete the space or something lol
h ttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1SXigHpJueaZyEEgR0myaKj5O-jRh7X2ko6EgxZAy5JM/edit?usp=sharing
I had a link to the same story several pages back on this forum but I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
You two have some issues with trusting authors. I don’t deserve this at all. What have I ever done to warrant this?! (lol)
I am an author and I don’t trust myself, so there! Lol.
trust me (or don’t haha), we all have done plenty to warrant being very sus of each other. It’s nothing to be ashamed of, or well it kinda is, but is…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
 even if we’re glad the character didn’t die, it often feels a little artificial.
While I agree with you that maybe killing off Adrian is the best course of action, especially considering this is supposed to be a realistic missionary story, I’ve also seen a story where it’s the opposite: They killed off a character because it…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 2 days ago
Thanks, it’s not that I feel ashamed, it’s that I feel like I am being self absorbed and selfish just asking for prayer for myself.
No, that’s not wrong. Especially in your situation. How many siblings do you have? Are you the youngest, oldest, or in the middle?
I’ll be praying for you. Is there a name I can refer to you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@whalekeeper In my mind, I see it as:
Protagonist–The main character or character whose arc we’re following. The POV character in a first-person story.
Hero–Subtype of protagonist. Usually someone with a sense of good and evil, a person with moral standards they won’t break unless in an extreme situation, a person worth emulating at least by…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 1 week, 3 days ago
One day, I hope to fly a million miles away. Where painful memories are far away, and the fresh beach breeze covers my dry skin. The sea would lap over me, tugging at my hair, and perhaps I would feel at home. The strangeness of my new world would comfort me from the horrors of the one past. I’d bring you with me if I could, but I’m not sure you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Yes, the defeating the prophesy junk is stupid unless there is a very valid reason. For instance, I had a character in a book who was cursed by the gods of his people because of a prophesy, but when he came to Christ he was able to flip that on it’s head and say, “you know what, I was cursed. But so are all of you. We are all cur…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
@rae yeah I can see that.
idk about misunderstood but tragic definitely.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
@freed_and_redeemed ugh you’re making me sad now
like in Freedom’s Fire you see him as mostly heartless and cruel, but in all the other books he is more humanized–he has a brother, he has a family, he has reasons for why he did what he did. Not that they were good reasons, mind you, but it means that it upsets you that he went down the path of…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
well also you can’t really talk about church density NOW as opposed to in the past….y’know?
pretty much about the entire country is really skewed when it comes to that these days….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
@calyhuge whoa he was your ancestor? As much as you might dislike him, you gotta admit that’s cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
@power @ellette-giselle lollll this conversation has me just sitting here on the sidelines watching, I would be eating popcorn but I’m not a huge fan of popcorn, unless it’s popcorn chicken so maybe that’s what I’m eating.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
@rae thank you!!
- glad I wasn’t disqualified lol
- confusion in writing is what I’m good at for some reason XD XD
- honestly though, I can see why you think this reads like a chunk of a larger story rather than a short story, cause it kinda is. I wrote it for practice and to maybe one day turn it into a larger storyline, cause that’s how I craft…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle wowwwwww
That is so cool!!
My dad designs houses, so if I ever want him to make me a house, I’m gonna ask him to put one in there.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle THAT WAS AWESOME.
I have like zero records of my family history lol. My dad is trying to find some information on his family tree, but there isn’t much to go by. I guess his ancestors didn’t keep a lot of genealogical records.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 4 days ago
@anyone
My rubber hose style drawing phase has returned
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
@rae @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @jonas @grcr @hybridlore @raxforge
Felicity—Group 1, ElderstrandÂ
Felicity shot a glare at the guy who had just brought everyone to the roof. He was currently lying down, exhausted, and right within kicking range. Felicity did not like being pulled from a fight before she could finish it.
“What? So we’r…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Copy pasting tags has always worked fine for me. You just need to make sure they’re spaced out properly
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
@koshka thanks!!
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Prettyyy, this reminds me of when we last went to the beach and sitting alone over the water in the evening 😊
@whalekeeper
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ooh that sounds super nice 🙂
That’s really pretty. <3 I want to put it to music though I have no idea how.