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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Smiley had been brought from under the bed as well.
Sounds like a scary place 😂
Smiley just smiled.
🤣
That was really funny! Wonderful eight-year-old writing!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
LOL that was really cute 😂
A buffalo buffing really does seem like something a kid would come up with. And tbh the dialogue was really good for 8 or 9 years old. I don’t even know if I knew what a council was at 8 🤣
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
Lol yes! My story is partially inspired by the city of ember. LOVE LOVE LOVED that book growing up. I didn’t actually realize the parallels until quite awhile through plotting 😅
Good job!
Thanks!😁
HEHE I wonder what Keiryn was doing in the mines? 🤨
Go on, Lesli, just give him a big hug in front of everyone, they don’t matter! 😊😍
Lol y…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76@lightoverdarkness6 @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @felicity @anyone @arien @starofthenorth
(Pls read chapter 3 first if you haven’t 😀)
Chapter 4
“Dad I’m going to go hang out with some friends.” Keiryn calls into the living room from the door.
Lesli glances up briefly from her writing, but quickly glanc…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Yes! Share your old writing!
If you have a mouse you can just right-click, too. Emojis! 😛
The inking turned out really well!
Yay! Thanks! 😁 There’s a couple of wonky spots, but I’m satisfied
You guys have family reunions? My mom’s side has them but they are in Tennessee 😑 we are super disconnected from our greater f…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
Thank you! I love writing emotional scenes soooo much 🙂
I’m actually not telling the setting because it’s so crucial. It’s one of the things I want to use to keep the reader hooked. I’ll put some not super major spoilers below, skip them if you want.
MINOR SPIOLER WARNING
Ok so Lesli and Tauren live underground. I’m not…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Share whatever you want!
Oh emojis on my keyboard is hold down the windows key and press the period button. Idk about not windows computers.
(YES FLOOFY) Oh you wrote his name too! The inking turned out really well! 😀 Lol don’t worry about it, I misspell his name sometimes too!
You guys have family reunions? My mom’s side…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Those Barret cats are awesome 😂😂🤣
Love it!
Haha, yay! Maybe I should draw a new and improved version someday 😂😂🤣🤣
Lol, thanks! 😁😊
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76 (why do I try to put a dash in your name like every time?!) @lightoverdarkness6 @folith-feolin (I can finally spell your name without using something for reference 😂) @whalekeeper @felicity
@anyone @arien @starofthenorth
Hey if yall are interested heres some of my story! If you want to read it I…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Yes! Great topic, but actually @theloonyone made it 😀
The boxcar children! I loved that series. I suppose instead of instead on plagiarized work, you could call it a fanfic!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
Thanks! Don’t worry about it lol!
Yeah I love love drawing my charries in flannels 😊 but yeah, we will see how long that lasts, it’s time consuming to draw.
Love that! And yeah, Nyx’s fur looks a bit hard.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 That looks so good! I love Lyn’s hair and the background
@arien Yes, you may hug the squidy as well 😊
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
I think part of it is that the Dickinsons are mean people to start with,
Yeah, that would do it 😂😂
I stared at him through the darkness. “What does that mean? Are we royalty?”
😲😲😲 what? whoa
So the Dickinsons accepted–Corwin was still a prince after all–but as Aedan and Elinor get older, the Dickinsons grow to hate them. So there’s…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
I didn’t know about plagiarism yet.
Ah, plagiarism 😐
I still have drafts of my next book (which was awful as well, but not plagiarism at least) which I might share tomorrow.
Eh, no plagiarism is definitely a step up. I’d love to see it! 😏😏
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 12 months ago
I agree, Boromir was originally a good guy, though he did get corrupted by the Ring. But he repents and dies a very noble death, in true tragic hero fashion.
YES! Yes, this exactly. And I love his relationships with Aragorn, Faramir, and Merry and Pippin
I haven’t seen the movies
They are wonderful!! 😁
it just seems like they completely c…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
Ooh, this is a really good start! I understood the setting, appearance, etc. My one question is why the Dickensons were so cruel to them. Is it just because they are a burden they didn’t want? And this definitely isn’t something that has to be answered in the first chapter, I just know it’s important that all characters have motives. I’m…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne started the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Our conversation of old writing gave me an idea, so…
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @folith-feolin @lightoverdarkness6 @ava-blue @felicity @arien @starofthenorth @anyoneelse
So this is partly based on a conversation about old writing and the podcast Do Your Worst (check it out, guys. And JK Studios). Basically, let’s share all…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
@theloonyone @whale-keeper @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @freedomwriter76 @felicity @Folith-feolin @loopylin @ava-blue @anyone
I have kinda sorta started doing the comics for my book, but really I’m just going to try it in a bunch of different ways to figure out the most efficient way to do it. I’m moving pretty slow with this because it’s time…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 12 months ago
I wrote a really long answer and posted it. It didn’t work and got deleted. So here’s a much shorter version!
I don’t think I’ve ever heard anyone say they liked Boromir though. I’m curious, why? 🙂
I had like a two-hundred-word response on why I like Boromir, but uh, yeah. It’s gone now. 🤪 Ahhh…. Anyway, I don’t know if he’s my absol…[Read more]
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