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@freedomwriter76

Like, I’m taking Algebra right now…just…UGHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Aw, I like Algebra!!!

That’s fine, people are different. 🙂

@felicity

Your romance story is so cute!! I like it a lot.

Aww, thanks. There’s plenty more scenes I could share . . .

 I threw a lot of them out because they were really cheesy. Everything was love at first sight except that the girl always pretended she didn’t know the guy liked her. 😂😂😂

Haha, same. In this story Irene is just like “Do I lik…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Hehe, I had no idea about what romance was at all. (I’d only had a crush on one guy before–little ten-year-old me liking a dude who must have been fifteen at least)

Front door after a date, Shakespeare style 😆

Yep. Oh, and Nicholas was basically the Florid Sword from the Wingfeather Saga. I totally copied it lol.

The whole story is…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Your story is so good! You were four? That’s really good for that young 🙂

The puppie’s parents were not sweet to them and they died. Heavenly Father killed the parents because they were mean to their children.

How violent. (lol!!)

I like how all the animals are related even though they aren’t at all the same species.

@freedomwriter76

YES!!! Curriculum can make the whole difference!!!

I know!! I . . . don’t like mine . . . at all . . . I guess it’s partly the way my brain works. I’m more of a math/science person.

@freedomwriter76

Your tag didn’t work 🙂

freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity

Okay, heres the beginning of my old story, that I already posted so you won’t be completely lost bc it just plunges right back in XD.

Once apon a time there was a camel. The camel loved to drink some water at the forest and he swam across the ocean so he could get some water…

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@freedomwriter76

I get that!!! 😉

Thats good! Sometimes I feel like I’m so awkward and nobody gets it XDD.

Maybe so. 🙂

Yeah!

Lol, I get that. XDXDXDXD

🙂 XDD

Agreed!!! 😀 It’s just a great story all in all. 😉

Yes!!! I actually have a sweet memory watching the newer one! I was about 6,  at my grandparents house, listening to my dad and grandpa ta…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YESSSSS!!!! Tell it, sister!!! XDXDXDXD

YESSSS!!!! Hans is my least favorite. I think. It’s hard to choose between Adoulphus, Diethrich, and Has. THEY ARE ALL GOING DOWN!!!

You are sooo welcome!!! 😀 <3333

I’m feeling better already :)!!

Also, I just read your newest chapter, and it is SOOO GOOD!!!! LOVE IT!!

@freedomwriter76

UGHHH RIKER!!!! PRECIOUS RIKER!! I LOVE HIM!!!

OH, and GREAT cliffhanger ;). I’m dying to know what happens!!

@felicity

Thank you sister! Sending a prayer up for you!!!

You’re so welcome!! Thank you so much!! <3 <3 <3

Yeah I did, just one chapter…but somebody said they wanted more…I forget who…so I’ll probably put some more on here soon.

I found yours!! Yes, please share the second chapter!! It was so cute! I loved the historical vibe–even if you didn’t…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I am so sorry I’m just now responding!! Thank you for tagging me :). I LOVE IT!!! OMG sweet Tauren and Lesli!!

And Keiryn!! I feel myself wanting to like him, but also, not. XDD But i’m starting to get a feel for him :).

That’s cool that they live underground! Unless it’s like a spoiler that you don’t want to share yet, you…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sure! I’m good with that! @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings Thoughts??

@felicity

Yeah! I kinda wanted to do NaNoWriMo but yeah, 50k is a lot. And tbh, that’s a short novel too. I think it’s good to make yourself write sometimes, but other times I think it makes my writing lower quality. Some of my best scenes are the ones I wrote really slowly, trying to get the wording perfect. I don’t think I can write much more…[Read more]

@felicity

Lol yeah, I’m already going pretty fast though lol.

I’ve written 12k words since like november… 10? I’m not sure. I was at 3k on the 13th.

idk if that’s actually fast, goodness time flies I didn’t realize it had been that long since I started the draft.

Just don’t want to get burnout lol. 😃

@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Matthew

I leaned against the wall, fiddling with a string on my shirt. Then I heard footsteps. And voices. Me and the rest of the group stiffened, waiting for something to happen.

The heavy wooden door opened, and a group of people was revealed.

There was Kaine, another young man, and…[Read more]

@felicity

Ah sorry Idk how to do that! 🤣

The best recommendation I can come up with is to make a list of the plot holes of your story (I have plenty 😅) and try to see if you can think of one solution for multiple at once. I personally really like doing that, and trying to connect characters the reader would never expect to be together, often…[Read more]

We could have them run into a villian? IDk. Maybe?

@theloonyone

Ooh, I know the band! But… just cause you told me about it. 😆

I like the song!

Lol

Yeah! It’s a good one.

@felicity

I am really on the edge of my seat now…

hehe… I wanna spoil SOOO BAD. I won’t though. I can’t 😆 I’ll just have to write faster lol

@loopylin

I finally read chapters 3 and 4! I’m sensing a Keiryn redemption arc…

🤐

Also, the Tauren drawing is adorable!💕

Thank you!