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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira, thanks! I don’t want to be a pest, but can you answer any of my questions?
Hmm, what do you think @livgiordano ? Do we know each other? Just kidding, yes we do. Quite well actually. At least I think so. Liv is one of my best friends in the world. She’s pretty awesome. *high fives*
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filewriter@base13x started the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Ok, guys. I really wanted to try this, and I think (hope) I will learn a lot of stuff from this. I hope you guys will help me by honestly critiquing this. What is here is my prologue and almost all of chapter 1. My writing is basically the same all the way through style wise, at least.
What I mostly want to know is:
1) Do I give enough…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira I’m finally here! 🙂 How’s it going? Are you still here for a bit?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira Nope! I’m still doing dishes. 😉 I said I’d be here in a little over an hour, not for a little over an hour. 😀
I hope it’s going well for you, and I hope you’re still on when I get here! Hopefully that won’t be too long now…just as soon as I get the dishes done…
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Skredder replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira Of course. I’m praying!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
I’ll be here in probably a little over an hour. Will anyone be on then?
@jenwriter17 @skredder @seekjustice @jess-penrose @sam-kowal @alia @ariel-ashira
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valtmy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder @ariel-ashira @rochellaine
Thanks! 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!
@ariel-ashira YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!
@daughteroftheking Thank you kindly. And yes, those are some good points. *strokes chin*
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part three: After the Storm
I opened my eyes eyes slowly, groaning as I sat up. Confused, I realized that I was on the floor. I rubbed the soreness off of my cheek. I noticed golden sun rays shining through the little gaps of the window shutters.…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder Aw, thanks!
@ariel-ashira byyye
@filewriterbase13x Indeed
I shall be back, just need to feed chickens and turn off some hoses and fun stuff like that.
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skreeder, True, true. I really enjoyed the last chapter I wrote, but since it was from a different POV I am having a little trouble getting back to my original MC.
@ariel-ashira, Bye! Thanks for talking.
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira and @skredder. Okay. Thanks for understanding.
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Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira Oh! That sounds interesting! 🙂
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira, and @skredder. I wish I could tell you where I am, but I’m not allowed to give out that info. No offense to you of course, just family rules.
@jess-penrose. *smug expression crosses face* That’s good. Good to know. You would probably think I was pretty boring anyways. Haha. Well, maybe.
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Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x @ariel-ashira @jess-penrose What are y’all working on?
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Haha, I won’t stalk you, don’t worry.
@ariel-ashira Huhn. Apparently I’ve been thrown out somehow with my guessing…
And to be an Aussie means that you are Australian.
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Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira I’m in Texas and it’s 6:46 right now.
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira, USA. EST time. I think. Yeah.
@jess-penrose, I was wondering the same thing
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yep. I am an Aussie in Australia. NSW. So, it’s 9:20 am over here. What about you?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Heya, anyone around? I’m working on my novel before breakfast.
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