Ariel Ashira

@seekjustice Okay.

I’ve almost finished reading it and I’ve got to say that talking to someone through a low window is near the top of my list of “most romantic settings!” 😀 😀 😀  It happened several times between one of my favorite fictional couples: Patty and Bill, from Carolyn Wells’ Patty series.  So you have totally made my day with the C…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Cool! I’m actually not going to be around for much longer, since I have physiotherapy today, but I should be around at my usual time today.

Yes, I did. 😀 and I’m sorry, but we will eventually get to the last two chapters 🙁

@seekjustice Hello!  I’m here. 🙂  I’m going to read your chapters then work on my western.

Did you get my message about A Tale of Two Cities?

@dekreel  This is cool!

Name: Kaya Young
Species: Giraffe
Appearance: Light purple and violet, long eyelashes, and dark brown eyes.
Personality: Sweet, has trouble focusing, joyful, gets really excited over everything.
Other notes and/or facts: Smells like pink roses, enjoys hula-hooping, and loves fountain pens.

@skredder

Sorry 😀 I’ve read the first part but I’ve had a crazy weekend and haven’t had time to comment yet, which hopefully I’ll be able to do today 😀

@rochellaine @jenwriter17 @catwing @skredder Anyone around? I’m writing!

@warrenluther04 That’s wonderful!!! (Goodbye 🙁 )

@rochellaine

Um…yeah?? I think so. Or wouldn’t it be your Thursday? or your Friday maybe, if we’re being technical, because it’s at 7pm…I don’t know.

@mnvalentine Thank you for letting us read this. I have to say that I am pretty curious as to what happens after this chapter. But, it does seem a bit stagnant. It didn’t feel like anything was really moving. Even the part where they had to rush to move everything in a week didn’t feel hurried. The characters themselves didn’t seem to move much.…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Through the majority of the story, it will be told from Casse’s POV. There are a few times where I will go into another character’s POV. Like I did with Evelyn in this one. The majority, like 96% of the story is going to be from Casse’s POV.

Head-hopping is a big problem I know I have and one of the things that I really need to fix…[Read more]

@skredder I read it! I still love this family 🙂 …..

There were only a few little things I commented on. I saw you said that it was supposed to be in Casse’s POV, which I didn’t know; I thought you were doing omniscient POV. I would suggest more following Casse’s action and her thoughts to make it her POV.

I’m looking forward to the next part! 😀

@seekjustice This is gonna be good! I also requested access. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Alright-y then! Here’s part 2. It’s a bit longer than part 1. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xt0Mg5mn3HJW2aIZvbheF66fFbkISe567zs-KRVw7N0/edit?usp=sharing

@seekjustice I just finished watching ATOTC 1958.  I am weeping, comfort me!  I am thankful it is the first two chapters of your novel you have given us, rather than the last, for I could never bear it.

@skredder I’m ready for it any time you’re ready to give it  😉

@seekjustice Yay! I can’t wait to read it! I requested access 🙂

@that_writer_girl_99 By all means, read away! 🙂

Sorry about the POV issue. I can’t seem to stay in one head. I will fix that when I edit the story. It’s supposed to be Casse’s POV.

@seekjustice This Friday? (Wednesday for me, right?) Okay, I’ll be praying for you!

@warrenluther04 That’s great!  I prayed for you several times yesterday, and was very happy to read your message in my email. 🙂  Goodbye, see you soon!

@leumeister You compose?  That’s cool!  My brother is a classical style composer.  Well, if you’d like to send me those links I’ll listen to them, but I’ll warn you that they probably will not have a chance at changing my preferences. 🙂  Sorry.  So if you, as the composer, don’t want to have a possibility of someone disliking them, you prob…[Read more]

@valtmy Usually people on here are really nice about it if you just let them know you only want a specific few people on the document.  You might get a few random views of people reading it, but they won’t comment unless you want them to.  People always ask me for permission before commenting on my documents, and I do the same for others.  So if…[Read more]