Ariel Ashira

@mnvalentine

I agree with what everyone else has said. I think the problem has to do with the pacing and the passiveness of the main character. There is a lot of description that slow the story down and much of the information conveyed through dialogue could have easily been summed up in a few lines.

Just some thoughts…

#1: The article in the…[Read more]

@rochellaine, okay. I thought maybe she had posted a portion in one of the forums. but that makes sense

@jenwriter17 Thank you so much!!  I’ll need them.  I’m not going to do it right now, though.  My little sister is singing “You Are My Sunshine” and “Eensy Weensy Spider” a few feet away from me, so I don’t think I’d better start crying and sniffling… 😀

So right now I will try to get my word count for Camp NaNoWriMo in on my western, and ma…[Read more]

@leumeister My real brother is wondering if you make money on your songs. (My real brother, who is not you, no matter how many times people that for some reason…)

@jenwriter17 No I didn’t cry for the movie. But that song makes me sad. and nearly cry. :*(

@kaymart Heyo! Well, you can subscribe to topics and you will get an email whenever someone posts on that topic. also you get an email when someone tags you.

@rochellaine oh dear yes….the dreaded third part. I will be here to support you, and hand you tissues.

There…..I just order boxes of tissues in bulk 😛

@dekreel Nice ending. He has risen indeed!
(apparently I can search for GIFs even if I hide them. I have the ability to forget things. XP Oh, yes.

@jenwriter17 Okay I might do it!  But then…help!  I’ll have to reread the whole third part!  How will I survive? 🙁

@seekjustice Just give them a few more window scenes and I might fall for them. 😉  I don’t care what happens, whether the conversation is completely boring, whether they argue, whether they kiss – I just love the fact that they’re talking through the open window!!!  Since it seems like Justice is accustomed to coming to Chessy’s window when he w…[Read more]

@rochellaine haha, Chestice! that’s awesome 😀 I’ll let you know if I think of one…

ah, yes, Sapphire and Quillon were definitely a couple. 🙂 ooh yes, Rain + Kendall fanfiction sounds awesome 😉

@jenwriter17 Well, the first one I came up with was Chestice. 😀  What do you think of that? And can you come up with any more ideas?

I may not ship Chessy and Justice, but I did ship Quillon and Sapphire!  Hey, what would you think of some Rain/Kendall fanfiction based on the conversation between Chessy and Rain about their crushes on Justice a…[Read more]

@jenwriter17, it has been very interesting and eye opening

@rochellaine, where can I read @seekjustice ‘s book???

@rochellaine Hi! yup, still here 🙂 you are forgiven 😉

hmm, no I don’t have a ship name. Do you? 😉

@ingridrd @kaymart @catwing anyone else want to join too?

@jenwriter17 If you’re still here – and if you’re willing to speak to me after what I said about Chessy and Justice – I’m writing now. 😉

Say, do you have a ship name for them?  😛

@valtmy I guess the best way to do it would probably be to just put the link out there for everyone, and say that there’s a limited time – say one or two days, or maybe less – to access it.  After the time is up, you can copy everyone’s comments into your own notes and then delete the document.  Then the link will be empty and no one can read y…[Read more]

@daeus

I might consider that. Thanks!

@rochellaine

Haha I know you guys are all really nice. The problem is that people outside the KP forums can access it as well and I’m shy about my writing. 😳

@that_writer_girl_99

Hmm… I did think about using that feature but I know not everyone may want to give out their email so I wanted to check if…[Read more]

@rochellaine WHAT? YOU DIDN’T SHIP THEM?! GIRL, I WAS SHIPPING THEM SO HARD BY THE SECOND HALF!!!

@seekjustice We shall convince Rochellaine that Chessy and Justice should be a couple! 😉

@mnvalentine I think it is somewhat boring, in a way. Of course, there’s the question, ‘What’s going to happen next?’ which is partially engaging and makes me want to read more. But, the characters and the conflict didn’t drag me in for the first chapter. August has some conflict because he’s not as popular as Trent, but he didn’t seem to want…[Read more]

I’m back by the way 🙂