Ariel Ashira

@seekjustice Oh, boy.  Rochellaine had some good thoughts.  And our language and cultures definatley differ from state to state.  But its a good idea to let us read it, if you are comfortable doing that.

😀 What do you guys say to make fun of us?

And BTW, are you or @rochellaine on the Story Embers forum?

@seekjustice @rochellaine I am on for a little while, I think.

Awww thats so sad!  Yes, I will pray.

@daeus Okay.  Thank you!  Its still helpful!

@itsastarrynight Thank you!  @daeus Do you have a little time to give me some advise on this?

@jenwriter17  I guess I just describe every scene in detailed, sensory language, and I have been working on adding more subplots.  I do struggle with creating complicated plots!

@sarah-anson  One thing that helps me when I am having a difficult time picturing and understanding one of my characters is to write out a bunch of questions about them.  Like, what makes them cry?  What makes them laugh?  How do they react to different situations?  How do they change from the beginning of the book to the end, and what makes…[Read more]

@rochellaine Once and for all I am not heartless and neither are you!  Even God kills people when it will glorify him most, and he loves his creation even more than we love our characters!  Its the same way when we kill our characters.  

Howcome I don’t get a sidekick like Stan or Bobert or Evie?

@sleepwalkingmk @rochellaine I like Sobbin Women a lot.  Its especially funny after researching Roman stuff. 😀 I like Wonderful Day a lot too.  All thier songs are good though.  They have amazing voices!

@rochellaine Oh my…umm, I like Millie and Adam and Gideon a lot.  So many of them are funny though!  What is your favorite song? @sleepwalkingmk you too

Really, Rochellaine, killing characters is hard, but it can be good.

@rochellaine BTW, killing characters is not heartless.  Its good writing.  I have never thought you were heartless!

@alia *squeals*  I can hardly wait!!

@rochellaine *stares at wall..*  you went to bed before we did?  This should be recorded…

You like SBfSB?

@daughteroftheking I know its the next day, but I will say hi anyway!

@rochellaine You are NOT heartless!  I meant that you made it sound like seekjustice was heartless!

@alia I am not prodding you. Im telling you!!!  Write it!!!  So many of us who are interested or just lead boring lives would find it fascinating!!

Okay, I have to go. 🙁

@rochellaine That poem is terrific!  Goodness, its so heartless!  Makes seekjustice sound awful, when she’s not at all.

@alia Amazing.  Very Interesting.  Tell me more of anything if you like!  You should write a story about your life and what its like there.

@alia What is China like?  Do Americans have a wrong idea of China and what its like?

@alia Wow.  Sounds like your family travels!

@rochellaine Ooh!  Can I read that poem, please?