Annika C.

@scripter-of-kingdoms

LOL!!!!  That’s exactly what my writing looked like!!!! 😆

Yeah, I agree with everyone else, you’re soooooooooooo close, it’s fine, i think 😉

and besides, you’re now a big part of this forum and it would be so sad if you left!!! 😢

@writerlexi1216

Girl, you got talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Keep sharing PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I NEED to meet Newton now… 😉  The first part got me ABSOLUTELY hooked–and your imagery and metaphors were sooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can’t wait to read the next chapter (hint hint 😉)!!!!!!!!!!!!

@gracie-j Thank you! Whoa, I love your descriptions!

@nova21 Wow, those are great!

@gracie-j

Aww, girl, you’re so encouraging!!! ❤️ Thank you, I’ll tag you when I post it!!!

@everyone

Y’ALL.  This is AMAZING!!!  I ❤❤❤ everyone’s SOOO much!!!!

Ok, I have 2 WIPs, so here’s the first one, As Dark As Mist and Shadow:

Scars tell stories.  They tell of our success and failures, of our wins and losses.  Some people let their scars define them, but some define their scars.  I survived, mine say.  I can’t be beaten…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Beautiful!

@e-k-seaver Ooh, nice! The first one is quite funny, to me, at least. The second one…wings? I want to know more about the wings! And I remember reading the last one on your blog!

@joy-caroline

Okay! See you Tuesday! Have a lovely break!

@joy-caroline Have a nice break!

@writerlexi1216
Thank you so much for sharing! That was great! I love how you set everything up.

@joy-caroline Oo, nice hooks!

@abigail-m Oo, Nice! I like how you set up the MC and the setting right off the bat! Thanks, by the way!

@kathleenramm Thank you! Your comments make me very happy (❁´◡`❁)

@seekjustice Thank you! That’s exactly what I wanted to set up with the prologue. I love yours as well! I really want to know what’s going to happen!

@devastate-lasting

Those are a beautiful couple first lines! Something about your pros is always so lovely. It for some reason reminds me of kaleidoscopic water color painting with a touch of magic. I love it. XD

@abigail-m

I really love the imagery those first sentences. It already paints a clear picture of the scene in your head.

The bells clanged at the railroad crossing, lights flashing as the train brushed by, the wind scattering flower petals everywhere.

“Ah…”

He stood there, watching. Watching, waiting…

@kathleenramm Oo, I love that! That sounds really interesting, I’d love to read your story someday!

Ahem. Anyways, the above was from my current novella…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I write the complete opposite of high fantasy, so I can’t really give you any pointers on it…but since you’ve just finished your first draft, and it’s your work, I’d say go for it, girl! And even if it doesn’t work out, you can always write another series if you want to!

(Wait, you guys edit after finishing each book? I wait til…[Read more]

@imwritehere1920 Here, I’ll liven it up for you… (I just got to their profiles cuz I really can’t remember…)

@gracie-j @issawriter7 @scripter-of-kingdoms @nova21 @jenwriter17

@scripter-of-kingdoms That looks so nice!

*tempted to print mine out but I have no place to put them haha…*

@scripter-of-kingdoms Oo, nice!

@imwritehere1920 Unsplash for stock photos! Back when I created memes I just looked up “meme maker” and used whatever popped up…gifs I go to Pinterest, though I don’t think they’re stock…