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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ok, I’m back, because I don’t think I described him accurately. Another try, shall we?
Viktor: ’54” but growing (eventually), dark brown hair that’s beginning to curl, but isn’t yet (all that part was right, it is cut in the Yartassite style which was described above). Olive toned skin, keen dark brown eyes. Tall straight nose that is almost…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Viktor popped another auleive into his mouth and adjusted his mantle to catch the rising breeze.
And shade the auleives. He hadn’t brought them up here, out of their nice cool brine, only to let them dry in the sun.
Spring is almost over, soon the grain will come in. Then we will…
But why think of that now, when the earth spread out below…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ooooooooo! This is awesome!
So, hi! I am Koshka (or at least that’s who I am around here, bwahaha) and here are my characters; 17 year old twins Zlatan Vulkasin, who though wolves in my book will, for convenience, be human here. That are wearing swords, a shield strapped across the back, and an open-faced Rus style helmet. Zlatan will also be…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ah, fantasy. I will admit, magical fantasy isn’t my strong suit, as I can find it to be to engrossing (and I’m waayy too much into history to keep my hands out of medieval fantasy, which is technically my genre.). But I love Narnia and have enjoyed LotR.
That is a hilarious question, mainly because, before I read t…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
This looks fun…. (And I guess it’s role-play styled.)
Oh, hi! It’s good to meet you, I’m called Elishavet around here, and I mostly write fantasy, but Essays, Poetry, and Other Random Things are not unusual.
But, I’m not the one visiting this castle; it’s one of the many characters I am responsible for.
Meet Viktor…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page….Woohoo in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Firstly, thank you for making this post. I don’t know how much wisdom I have to offer, since I am struggling with this same thing. Seriously, I have two characters that I am planning to kill,(one is doomed beyond hope since his death is literally the finale of his arc. The other may escape my sword. May being the operative word)…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Me idea in the forum Plotting 4 years, 4 months ago
Well, I really haven’t been paying enough attention have I? I just saw this tag. =|
That sounds like a good start for a story, and is making ideas spring into my head. If written well it wouldn’t be cliche. It has some possibilities for a powerful storyline.
Random spark of ideas- What if this country is something like Israel under…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page….Woohoo in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, murdering characters is definitely one of those harder things about story plotting. I have a MIA in one of mine who won’t come back, even though part of me is testing that point pretty hard.
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huge Wingfeather spoilerÂwas so well written, but, ahh, it hurt. *Sniff* -
Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic How Do You Turn a Spark Into a Blaze? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 5 months ago
That was Wrecker and Hunter from The Bad Batch, right? I love those two!
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Elfwing replied to the topic Has a song ever inspired a story, scene, or character? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 5 months ago
yeah most of my characters are at least somwhat based off music. I have adhd and anxiety and music help, but it also helps me write too. My playlist is all over the place lol so it works well for diversity XD
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Elfwing replied to the topic Greetings; I am a Jesus-follower in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 5 months ago
@unsung Yayyy!!! you’re hereeeee! now lemme get this party started
ahem @daisytorres @kathleenramm @devastate-lasting @abigail-m @joy-caroline @lydia-s @godlyfantasy12 @trahia-the-minstrel @mkfairygirl @sparksaraabbott11 @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @issawriter7 @i-haven’t-been-on-here-in-far-too-long-and-forgot-everyone’s-tags O_o
Y’all, this…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Hope That Remains Despite Illnesses in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 5 months ago
Beautiful. It never ceases to amaze me how a simple choice of words and rhythm can convey such various feelings. Your choice seems to give a broken hearted yet flowing stream of thought.
I would consider smoothing the rhythms or word choice so that the sentences work together a little smoother, but it is lovely as it is. Well…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic How Do You Turn a Spark Into a Blaze? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 5 months ago
Ooof, I have the same difficulty. Or rather, a very, very similar one. I have been working on two WIPs for almost a year. No, scratch that: it’s been over a year. Anyway, these two book ideas both started from ideas for characters, with vague impressions of their plots. Now after months of quiet world building, scene crafting, and…[Read more]
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