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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Yippee! Now for the explosive confession!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
I’m figuring out how to make him talk, I just don’t think he would as long as they’re on that stairwell. So get them out, and ask him again, if you like. 😉
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel
“We care about you, you know.”
“Thanks.” Mikkel slipped off his helmet, running fingers through greying hair. He absently wondered if it showed in the dim light. “I just… it’s nothing.” He shoved the memories back down, clamping one hand over his left hip.
Lier. “Nothing much.”
Still lier.
He took a few more steps…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel
The lights flashed again, but this time he couldn’t hear the screams.
“I’m fine.” His voice snapped, the strained edges mocking him.
Eva’s step faltered, and the Lieutenant’s stopped completely.
Mikkel wanted to lie, to say it was just migraines, but they’d know better. “I’m sorry.” He whispered, and wiped the dampness…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Exactly! That’s one huge reason I write so young. It’s awful, and I hate it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Whatever Eva had just done rumpled Ezra even as it smoothed him. Interesting.
He smiled, but this time it didn’t reach his eyes. Wonderful times are gone. “As you say, sir.”
Fiddles, he’d said it.
Mikkel clicked the safety on his firearm. No brains in going around with a hot weapon.
The stair was dark, much like the lower…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
So… I have two other characters that I’d like to add because they could really use some character development, but I didn’t know if that would be too much…
I could take out my character I have now (Everett) and replace him with another. Or I could add both… I didn’t know what ya’ll thought. I just didn’t want…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Probably. XD I suppose I accidentally write boy soldiers.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel
United states. He had obviously lightly offended the pilot.
Eva, the young woman, recovered. “And what brings you here, Private Mikkel Winston? And it’s a pleasure meeting you.”
She held out her hand.
Mikkel bowed over her hand, for an instant the proper son of a knight.
“I have little idea what forces brought me he…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin are waiting for others in that group to respond, but they’re probably going to be heading off after Lord Ocran soon. That would probably be a perfect time to meet. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel started when a young woman stepped in. He glanced away when the two met. Girlfriend?
The soldier, Lieutenant Ezra, turned back to him. “Agreed…but what about you? Who do you ally yourself with? And also, what’s your name?”
“Private Mikkel Winston, Mariner, 2nd division, soldier of the Pact.” Mikkel felt his heels click…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hey Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 2 months ago
*Returns high-five*
Ooo, that’s hard to pick. Probably my favorite time’s to research are the various early medieval time periods. I dabble all over the place, but those are the most frequent. Otherwise WWI&II, or the recreation of the state of Israel.
And I have to go back to the castle!
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Explanation: Zlatan is his world’s version of a Siberian prison officer. Reading Riker’s is making his story feel a little more real.
Maybe! 😉
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
The soldier lowered his pistol. “Happy now?”
Relief poured over Mikkel like water. Or cold sweat. He lowed his rifle barrel.
“Actually, chap, yes.” Mikkel looked the foreign soldier over. Unidentifiable uniform, dark hair and eyes, strange accent. First generation pistol. “Who are you allied with? Who’s that out in the hall with you?”
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Mikkel
A soldier stood in the door, the glint of a small firearm in his hand. “Who’s there!”
Mikkel’s gun was in possition before the target even saw him, his mind switched to instinct.
“State alliance.” Mikkel’s voice slit the air, cold, emotionless.
“Allied?” The soldier didn’t move, his pistol still aimed straight.
There…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hey Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 2 months ago
*Cloaked figure swings in through window*
I have found you, history nerd! Meet another history nerd, although she may be a different nerd than your nerd.
Perhaps I used that Doc. Seussical word too often.
*Akwardly fiddles with cloak clasp*
Anyway, although we’ve already met elsewhere, I just found this file, so here are some…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Oops, forgot to mention he happens to have a title, but it isn’t worth much. Technically he’s Sir Mikkel (insert last name I have yet to figure out). It’s a hereditary title almost as old as the home that came with it. His father died in the first part of the war, thus passing it on to him.
Mikkel
Darkness, cold and bleak.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
I’ll be writing him as human here, although he is actually a feline in the book. So, for a description…
18, Average height, light brown hair (premature grey at the temples), yellow green eyes, slighter build. Wearing a military uniform similar to WWI Canadian infantry, with helmet, except for navy blue and green stripes on the…[Read more]
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