Anatra

@whalekeeper

You’re fine! O do like trying to figure out how they would look if they were human though, but that gets confusing, so anyway.

You guessed correctly: I am writing a trilogy! In each book I have a slightly more central MC and a second MC, so some of them do get a bigger spotlight, although it may not be very noticeable in the finished draft.

@godlyfantasy12

I think Elishavet is working on one right now…so what do you want to talk about? 😉

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah, Zlatan in the RP is in between his resolution and the epilogue, so still a bit torn up but healing. My poor lad.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

November was awake now, and better was walking with Riker’s help.

But Asher and Jayden…Mikkel found himself standing awkwardly beside Michael, at a loss for what to do.

They started moving on again, but still everything felt topsy-turvy.

Mikkel shrugged off the feeling.

“So chap,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sure! Or at least I’ll try to be fast. I’m not quick with words.

@godlyfantasy12

Very nearly literally. But don’t worry too much! He survives.

I don’t think I could kill him. (Hear that Zlati? Your author loves you!!!)

@freedomwriter76

I do too!!!!! We have to get those two together…maybe have these two groups meet up? Naja needs her Daddy, November needs Ara, and vise versa.

[And I just thought of something;I know practically nothing about Marvel, but I think I’ve picked up that part of Bucky’s trauma was caused by Russian speaking people. What would happen…[Read more]

Because to give a real explanation I’d need to tell practically half his entire plotline, so it’d have to go on the spoiler page.

@e-m-trepke

Aha! That makes……….ooo, that’s beautiful…..

@godlyfantasy12

Do you want the long and detailed version, or the short and boring one?

Short version: a child indirectly woke up his conscience, then he basically gave his life to save a bunch of kids from the prison camps where he’s a guard.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

Another corridor opened in front of them. Good. They were well out of the tower by now.

Not that those guards behind them couldn’t follow…

Nyx’s voice broke in on his mental calculations. In his head. Is there no peace even in my mind? He sighed and resigned himself to the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I sort of am? But I won’t be for too long.

I’m also trying to minimize my time spent on media, so if I’m a bit unsteady on here, that’s why.

@godlyfantasy12

AAGHHH!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!

Don’t do this-please don’t do this!!! I need these charies as they are in the book! Not…

Evil maniacs.

This is crazy. I mean, good character development, or course. 😉

Come to think of it though…no matter the situation, any character can become the villain of their own story. What true…[Read more]

Alyona

It was astonishing how much Franz changed when his daughter there.

It was also astonishing how offense the term “child” was to at least two in the group. Alyona suspected that Vulkasin had practiced a rare bit of self control.

And had he really called her a lady? She pinched her lips together to try to stifle her sudden humor.

“Ah, a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76  @koshka

I’m thinking that after November wakes up, or around that time, I’ll bring in my crazy side character. He would probably not stay with the group, but rather get them moving along and provide amble opportunity for conversation/fluff. He’s a hilarious old meddler.

As for the questions, first off, Ocran…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h@koshka

Y’all, Y’ALL, Y’AAALLLLLL!!

I’m a little excited about how this is going.

So, there’s a scene much later in Heir of Ashes that has Viktor and *cough* Fritz stuck in a ravine, waiting for rescue because both boys are rather battered from a recent encounter with bitterness personified. And Fritz is…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

First off, I am furious about your WIP. I love those characters too much to see them turn villains!!!

Secondly, that’s awesome. I love the character development. It’s so brilliant!

Just don’t be mad if I kidnap your characters out of your AU. 😉

(Just kidding, of course. It really is awesome.)

@freedomwriter76

Yayyy!!!!!!!! I’m so glad!

And also, just to clear things up, the lines

This day is life come where only death has dwelled. Rise up servant, warrior reborn. Rise up child, son of the Highest King.

Were supposed to be in italics, because that’s the King speaking.

@joy-caroline @freedomwriter76 (RIKER!!!) @godlyfantasy12 (Thank you! It means a lot to know you find it so. 🙂 ) @koshka

So, I promised a while back that I’d share this scene, but I had a lot left undone in it at the time. Now, while it’s still extremely rough and subject to change depending on how the story falls out, it is complete.

So, here…[Read more]

@joy-caroline.  @koshka. @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy1

So, y’all, I need some thoughts on this scene in my rough draft. Does it make sense? Do I say too much or too little? It’s rough draft, so not my best writing, but I really need some thoughts on it.

(And I still need to plot and pray over Lennet, Alwin’s mother. I’m not quite sure about…[Read more]